Review of chapter "Monsters" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
Not a bad start. This has the potential to be a really good story if you developed it a bit more. I know plenty of people taht would LOVE to read something like that. Lindsey is a great character and I could definately see him helping them out a little. Will you considder adding more to this fic? It'd be great if you did.
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin
] • Date [4 May 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monsters" from Tjin
not bad, needs a bit more in the words area but still... not bad
Review By [Tjin
] • Date [3 Nov 06] • Not Rated