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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Tammy driving the car like a maniac was good especially since Buffy got a taste of her own driving, too bad she had to bite the dust.
Good story, looking forward to reading the last in the series.
Comments from author:
Thank-you,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [15 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Season One B, really? You're right, that's twisted.

It's so twisted in fact, that I've posted Challenge 3046

11.14.07... Which has disappeared :/

Huh.
Comments from author:
This sounds interested i must check this out.

Thanks for your continuing support.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from JoeDineen
Review:
Good story, a bit darker that your usual but the funny bits were still funny. I am surprised that Faith had anything to do at the end. I would have though that Buffy could throw a rock through some-one's head. Sad to hear that it will be the second last Seattle Slayer story, though I am sure you will come up with something else shortly.
Comments from author:
Yes, well we're coming up to the series finally and its got to end with a AAAAAGH! PLEASE! NO MORE!

I'm working on loads of stuff which I hope you'll find as entertaining. Will & Ken and the Seattle Slayers won't disappear completely. They just won't be the main series anymore.

The end bit; well Faith breaking Kevin's neck might have been a bit of overkill. I never said that Buffy's stone didn't kill him outright. He just fell into Faith's arms as she came into the clearing. As the man said; It's the only way to be sure!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [5 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
Cool ending dude!!.
And yeah, it was kinda dark, but cool =).
Congratulations for such a cool fic!.

See ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, you are too kind!

all the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Why do I have a feeling there may be southpark moment on the way ;)
Comments from author:
Wait a few more hours and you'll find out!

all the best,
Dave.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from JoeDineen
Review:
Much darker than your normal. Willow should really go around with permanent buffs. Interesting that there is no sign of the Babh so far, I wonder is the Dark Lord keeping them busy somewhere.
Comments from author:
Badb? Goddesses have other work to do.

I always felt that the more you use magic the more chance of you going 'dark', this is why I keep Willow's magic use to a minimum...it's alao a handy plot device that stops her becoming all-powerful and where would be the fun in that?

Dark? You've seen nothing yet...MAW-HA-HA!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
Man, that's a mad dash!!.
One if it's by Mini.
Two if it's by Tractor.
And Three if it's by a stolen police car.
There they go, Buffy & Tammy, the fearless... Bad Things killers!!.

(Ok, I was gonna put Vampire Slayers, but considering that they also hunt demons and many others bad things... and dude, that was one hell of a funny chase!)

And by they way, poor Xander, going alone in the midday sun, I hope that Killer Kevin doesn't get him =S.

Excellent chapters!.

ETA: Well, the verse was a small pun to that particular poem, by the way, Poor Tammy, I hope that she makes it the second time.

See ya!!!
Comments from author:
All will be revealed soon.

Glad you enjoyed the chase, and thanks for the little verse (Paul Revier(sp?)).

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven." from Mcspender
Review:
Aieee!!! Here's lies a Killer Cliffhanger!!!!.
Dude, this is freaking giving a hearth attack ya know??. Let's see how this is ends.

Excellent chapter!!.

See ya!!!
Comments from author:
Yeah, it was too good to waste and much too tempting.

Last chapter? Maybe tomorrow.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Infinix
Review:
When Kennedy was thinking about how she feels about Xander she forgot one rather major thing. He saved her life, at the vineyard when he is eye he was protecting her.
Comments from author:
You're quite right I'd completely forgotten that! We'll have to pretend that it didn't happen like that in this reality. I'll have to go back and check that one out!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [3 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Buffy's really going to freak out if she has to do the entire mad dash with Tammy over from the begining ;)
Comments from author:
Maybe...maybe not!

You'll soon find out.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from JoeDineen
Review:
Thelma and Louise, and Buffy looses another outfit in a mad cross country dash to save Willow and Kennedy. I am surprised that they considered making a run for it. They should know their luck better than that now.

Forting up in the cabin would be a better response, do they have enough ammo. I wonder, did Buffy hang onto the shotgun, I really hate it in movies where the hero leave a perfectly good weapon behind and then boldly marched into danger. I hope Buffy has more sense. I know she does not like guns but, she should know by now that with Willow and Kennedy involved there is no overkill, it is just reload and keep firing.

Edit Just read jrabbits review and your reply and paused on the vision of cheerleaders doing flips over the scrum.

Then I though about the kind of cheerleaders that could play in the scrum.... all I can say is that the hakka would never be the same again.

Edit again:
As a fellow old rpg'er I do know what you mean, on both counts. As a fellow gamer pointed out in a Twilight 2000 session, what he could not deal with, with a shotgun, he could probably use as cover.
Comments from author:
Yes! Lets march down this darkned track with no torch or any equipment what-so-ever. There's bound to be stuff lying around the 'Haunted Castle' we can use.

As an old RPG-er I never went anywhere without my sawn-off shotgun (4xD6 damage). But sometimes you have to do these things to make the story go with a AAAAAGH! SPLAT!

You know what I mean?

All the best Dave T.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Poor Buffy. Condemed to watch a raunchy cheerleading routine again and again - how will she bear... what am I saying?

Hope there's no monkey's waiting to attack in the woods ;)


edit: On the sidelines, or in the scrum?
Comments from author:
No monkey's...no sir...not in THIS story (MAW-HA-HA!).

Raunchy Cheerleaders; Add them to Rugby Union and the world would be perfect!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from JoeDineen
Review:
Twisted!, Buffy channelling her mom, very funny. The whole day rewinding but the magic people noticing very good. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

Yours twistedly

DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from asqwerth
Review:
You're back to your hysterical best with this story! I thought your previous story wasn't up to your usual standard (after the shock intro with the slaying of that Womble), so I'm glad.

Since this was one of the few Tru Calling episodes that I actually watched from beginning to end (and can remember), I can visualise what happened, and I like how you've incorporated the Buffy characters into it.

The sub-plot with poor Buffy in Seattle is also great, esp since you've not written a lot of Buffy previously in this series. I like how you've written her - well-meaning, but unsuspecting as to the plans the girls have for teasing her, and horrified that she's turning into an old fuddy-duddy.
Comments from author:
It's very hard to keep up a 'high' standard, and very easy to fall into the trap of repeating ones self and becoming bland!

Poor Buffy indeed, but you have to remember that here she is 28 or so I find most women turn into their mums eventually...sometimes this is good, sometimes its really really bad!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [asqwerth] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four." from Mcspender
Review:
Poor Faith!.
That was a one hell of a funny way to save her: turning her into Buffy, and Xander's reaction??, weeell.
It's like they say, when life gives you lemons, make lemon pie.
Victim Kevin turning out to be Killer Kevin? Cool!!. I mean, who wasted the guy in the first place, Tru's counterpart Jack??.
Keep the plot twists coming please!.

By the way, the efelant is for my 3 years old niece, she's a big Winnie the pooh fan and well... that's why a became an efelant hunter!

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Glad to hear the EFelant was only a toy! Phew!

Saving Faith? Seemed like a good idea at the time...you know I actually feel sorry for Xander.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [31 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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