Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Specks
This was very skillfully done for it's length. Perfect portrait of a defining moment.
Review By [Specks
] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
Whoa. Whoa. Confused.
I mean it was a good confusion. :-D Not gonna lie about that.
But still not really getting it. Was Kira supposed to be a replacement for Cordy?
Then if so who Xan replacing?
Or is it that he felt he could try with her but in the end, it was all for naught?
Good story still
Comments from author:
Xander was just replacing a lost love in general. Kira was never really given enough backstory to go into more detail than that, although I did consider making him a replacement for Cole, since Kira and Phoebe were portrayedas highly similar in some ways.
Thank you very much for the review - my very first not by someone I know personally, as well as on this site.
Review By [PrincessTai
] • Date [29 Oct 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]