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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shadowman
A good series I would love to see you continue it.
Comments from author:
I've got some ideas for continuing this series, but my muse hasn't been paying any attention to them. ;-(
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [21 Dec 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Obsidian
Loved it. would love to see it fleshed out as a longer story tho.
Comments from author:
There will probably be more stories in this 'verse, since I've got a few plot bunyips nipping at my ankles, but my muses hasn't decided on anything specific yet.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [23 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Wonderful story, I do wish you would add to this series.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll have to check with my muse about this series and find out what she wants to do.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [12 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LostDragon
Great set of stories, just wondering who Marcie, Cordie, Jon, and Andrew all dressed as. Maybe you could elaborate in a 3rd story?!?!?!?

Great job either way.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed the story, and a sequel is entirely possible, but depends entirely on my muse's whims. I'll pass the idea along.

Cordy and Marcie dressed as members of the G.I. Joe team, Lady Jaye and Jinx, while Andrew dressed as Captain America and Jonathan dressed as Jarod from the Pretender. ;-)
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [23 Jul 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Katrina
I really enjoyed this and the previous story. Great little series! I look forward to seeing what happens with the pack next... :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Have to wait and see what my muse wants to do next.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [25 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from hanahanachan
very amusing, I do hope that one day you might be struck with another idea to add to the tales of the scooby pack!
Comments from author:
Thanks. ;-)

Anything further is up to my muse's whims.
Review By [hanahanachan] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oxnate
Sequel review: "O'Neill - with 2 'L's"

I'm giving it a 7 only because it's not finished and hasn't been touched in years. I think this is a great start and would love to see where it goes.
Comments from author:
This story is finished, but the Scooby Pack saga is not. I just have to get my muse's interest focused back on it again. ;-)

And in the Scooby-verse, Jack O'Neil spelled his name with one 'L'. ;-)
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [5 Sep 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BuffyKaibaHunt
Awesome! :) I like it. Very brilliant, and very well-written as well. :) I also like this part:

The energy powering the spell which had transformed a significant portion of Sunnydale’s population into their costumes was abruptly disrupted when a somber and gloomy-looking man, dressed all in black, pale of face and with eyes cold as winter’s ice, kicked in the front door of the costume shop, advancing and repeating his action on the door to the rear office with the resolute and unwavering tread of the faithful come to confront the damned.

“Did you truly believe that I would stand back and permit you to mock the Lord Almighty by allowing you to practice your heretical, pagan rituals in my community, heathen?” he intoned, his glare damning and uncompromising as he looked with disgust and contempt at the Englishman sitting at the desk and staring at him in puzzlement.

“Who in the name of Chaos are you, you daft fool?” Ethan demanded curiously. “I thought that you were going to dress as some bleeding stereotypical vampire when you bought that outfit, but your aura’s all wrong for anything like that.”

“Why in the name of the Lord would I dress as one of those abominations, unbeliever?” the intruder demanded. “A hunter would never dress as that which he hunts – not even the damned are stupid enough to be fooled for even a second by the thought I had joined with them in everlasting damnation!

“And I have wasted enough time speaking with you,” he then declared. “Now, burn with those you chose to worship!”

Lifting both of his hands, which had been hanging by his sides ‘til now, the newcomer revealed the two flintlock pistols he had carried in with him.

The first shot took Ethan squarely in the chest, the lead ball deforming and splintering as it smashed through his sternum, perforating his lungs and chest cavity. If the shock of the ball’s impact hadn’t killed him, Ethan would have most likely have quickly drowned in his own blood.

Not even a flicker of satisfaction crossed the man’s face as he took a moment to regard the body lying on the shop’s floor before then turning to glare at the shelf on which the glowing sculpture of Janus sat.

“Blasphemy!” Solomon Kane growled as he lifted his remaining pistol, took aim at the mockingly smiling bust and pulled the trigger.

The blessed bullet shattered the sculpture and the resulting blast and subsequent fire not only destroyed the entire store but also incinerated whatever pieces of Warren Mears’ body had remained after the explosion.

Very brilliant and awesome! :) (I fixed the misspelling of the word “allowing” for you. Hope you don't mind.)
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from greysh
Lovely chapter :) I like the costume choices!
The scoobies can really use the extra knowledge and SG1 is just cool!
Comments from author:
Thank you. And all of the extra knowledge and ability AND inclination to use things that go BOOM! is definitely going to come in handy around the Hellmouth. ;-)
Review By [greysh] • Date [17 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Corris
Hope to at least see a meeting of Kendra and the Pack in the future.
Comments from author:
That is entirely possible.

If my muse ever returns, I'll suggest it to her. ;-(

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Corris] • Date [13 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DCG
Well this is an interesting set up.

Shame your not doing more of it.
Comments from author:
I will probably revisit this 'verse some time in the future, but I have no idea when, since my muse is already overburdened with plot and plot bunnies.
Review By [DCG] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ansku
Lots of potential :)
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Review By [Ansku] • Date [22 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
You did a good job with this story and I hope you will get inspired to add more stories to this series.

::Gives the plot bunny some Coyote shaped Carrot Cake::

The pine stays green in winter...wisdom in hardship.
- Norman Douglas
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'll have to see what my muse wants to do as far as more stories are concerned.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lordamnesia
Nice Halloween update on your incredible series. Hope you continue it!
Comments from author:
Thanks for commenting. I will probably follow this up sometime, but no idea when - that's up to my muse.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Starfall
lovely quite enjoyed reading the stories here for "Tales of the Scooby Pack" I do hope you at some are thinking about adding to it one day.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and commenting.

I have some general ideas about what might happen next, but that's all at the moment. Have to see what my muse feels about following this up.
Review By [Starfall] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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