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A Bleached Halloween

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.
Review By [APS] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lianwa
Review:
Cute. I liked the fact you had Billy, Mandy and Dexter ditching the Grim Xander and going home. Nice extra cameo.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! I thought it was funny to add the kids, myself.
Review By [Lianwa] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KageStevo
Review:
I signed up for an account just to review this story, to tell you WHAT. YOU MEAN ANGEL not spike.

ANGEL = GOOD

Spike = BAD

it isn't until season 4 that Spike isn't the enemy
Comments from author:
You didn't have to do that. It was a simple editing mistake.
Review By [KageStevo] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Yojo
Review:
What the hell? Spike is a 'big bad' at this point, not chipped; hell, the whole Halloween story is about Spike wanting to DRAIN and KILL BUFFY. Either do your research onto time lines, or give some sort of explanation. Sure, Willow would have objected to dusting Angel, but Giles, Buffy, Willow, and Xander all would have loved a chance to dust Spike. Either change the story around a bit or give a really good explanation.
Your idea of a costume and the execution of it was actually pretty well done, surprisingly enough, and stayed pretty much in character aside from the previous issue.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment. The whole name switch was due to a simple mistake by my beta, who is most definitely not a fan, and I just didn't catch it when it came back to me.
Review By [Yojo] • Date [30 Oct 07] • Rating [3 out of 10]
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