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Review of chapter "Prologue" from IcemanII
Review:
I just found this story. Nice xander story. Its a lot of fun,
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from GundumM
Review:
eh.. it's all right
Review By [GundumM] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from rothos
Review:
Interesting and good change into a duskblade, I assume he's a half-elf? Or is he a full elf?
Review By [rothos] • Date [26 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from speakerforthesilent
Review:
A neat idea. It's got potential, and it's well written. I'd like to see more.
Review By [speakerforthesilent] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Salric
Review:
Duskblades are broken.

It has potential. To go either way. We'll see.
Review By [Salric] • Date [2 Nov 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Duken
Review:
*drops coin in 'more' slot*

I have been meaning to try that class for a while (NWN&PRC), but never got around to it. Now I have to go try... Damn Youuuu! ;)


Out of curiosity, how many HD does he have? 13?
Comments from author:
Around ten, at least that's what I was thinking when I wrote this.
Review By [Duken] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from purrfus
Review:
I know nothing about the cross and was still able to enjoy the chapter. Good work.

I am a little torn about the style though. I liked the way you went straight to transformation, leaving out a repeat of episode dialog, and the library scene with Giles was interesting, but overall I think it was a little abrupt.

More please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
Review:
First, a proof reader would be nice. Second, I liked your story. It was short, but it still entertained me. I hope you write more as some of the best fun of a Helloween story is how the lasting effects screw up the vast eternal plans of those PTB bastards. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Tjin
Review:
not bad... a very nice start, thanks for letting us read.

-Tjin
Review By [Tjin] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from ianquest
Review:
A very interesting story! I look forward to reading more. I do suggest that you try and stretch things out a bit in future chapters, though; while the quick pace of this one matched the speed and deadliness of the Mage Hunter, and you needed to keep some things a surprise (ie Xander's transformation), it still felt a bit rushed and abrupt. More description of events, places and people is always good, so long as you don't go overboard.

Also, be careful not to develop Xander into a Marty-Sam character with godlike magical powers; Halloween fics allow a useful starting point to expand an underused character, but people often go too far with giving Xander power, especially when they're making him a magic-user. Your statement that he's not the best fighter or wizard, but his strength is in being able to do both, is an excellent starting point for keeping balance and injecting a bit of 'realism' into the story.

I eagerly await the unpleasant surprises coming the way of the next few magic-using bad guys to attack the hellmouth!
Review By [ianquest] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Recent Donor)drdeth
Review:
Nice start, i look forward to the next chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)drdeth] • Date [1 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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