This is really good so far I hope you decided to update soon

Would love to see where this is heading :)

the nox bit made me interested in this story. i'll follow it. the nox are rarely see in fiction .:)

thank you thank you thank you. The last time I saw this story Willow was at the dock. Two chapters and I am looking at a new view on the horizon.

Great work. Looking forward to what happens next.

Intetesting so far,though little makes sense so far.

Glad to see this updated. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Interesting story. Are the black streaks in Willow's hair a permanent feature now? Looking forward to Buffy catching up with her; and also expecting an encounter between Jack and Buffy shortly after Jack met Willow.
Seems to be some interventionist ascended here (maybe the PTB or some other faction, with an Oma Desala link), who intend to interfere with the Nox's chosen path.

I like the "spookiness" you're creating in this story. This has potential to be quite a trip.

Was kinda thrown by the brief Buffy/Wendigo reference...was "Aunt" the Wendigo trying to interfere in Buffy's search, or was it just some arbitrary Wendigo she ran into?

And there are TWO birds, right? A "crow" for Willow and a "raven" for Buffy? Or is it the same bird being called different things?
I get the impression you're trying to show the influence of two different groups here, but not sure. Possibly ascended beings?

Anyway, don't forget that the Nox ultimately told Jack they were going to bury their gate after SG-1's visit. So if your timeline is post that visit, you'll need to explain how Willow uses the Gate to get to their planet.

The wendigo is something Buffynran into while looking for Willow. I'd originally planned to spend a chapter on that encounter but changed my mind.

Two "birds" yes. Aunt, who is guiding Willow towards the Nox, and Raven, who seems to be pointing Buffy in Willow's direction.

While I am totally lost, I am really enjoying your story. Nice to see more fallout from Darth Willow than they had time to show on the show. Since you have combined the Buffyverse with the SGC universe, I am wondering if Tara Ascended versus actually dying. Or if it isn't Tara helping, just who it is that is helping Willow and Buffy with their hunts.

A very good start.

Very good beginning, are there any bribes you think your muses might like to bring them back to this one? Or the Red Raider series?

Love your writing style and the way you handle the characters, very well done and thanks for sharing.

Another fun one to reread, even if its only these two chapters. I particularly liked this line, 'exit Willow Rosenberg, pulled by snails', and it retains a bit of intrigue to keep me interested should your muse decide to revisit this one any time soon.

Oooh, very good beginning. So after 3 months she ends up at Jack's cabin, apparently with a bit more magic ability, if she can spare the power to vanish, but not so clean as to have normal eyes. I'd really love to read more of this.

Please continue. I need to know where Willow goes. I need to know if Buffy finds her. And all the stuff in between.