Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from JinaSolo
This is a very interesting story! Ant it was just about to get more interesting!
Review By [JinaSolo
] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from nerfherder
I cried when I got to the last page. This is some primo fine quillwork. Please consider updating this. It is actually original! So very rare...
Review By [nerfherder
] • Date [28 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from willboon
please update this story has alot of promise
Review By [willboon
] • Date [23 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from herbsandlemons
I really hope you finish this story I really like it even an update would make me deliriously happy. I love Anit/Buffy crossovers. Even if you cant find the inspration... Great job anyway.
Review By [herbsandlemons
] • Date [19 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from Fyrecat
Great story. I'm guessing that since it hasn't been updated in 2 years that it never will be. Too bad.
From a general critique angle, your story could benefit from more character interaction and development. There are so many loose threads, Narcissus the Hyenas, relationships with the other weres, why Micah didn't give Xander a job at his construction company, what Jean Claude and Asher will do with the new folks in town, where Willow and Tara's new found power will take them, how Dawn's power will develop, all sorts of good stuff.
Review By [Fyrecat
] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from Silver
I found this while I was reading your story "Cousin Xander". I love it. I think you got Hyena Xander just right, with the mix of soldier thrown in. And the friendship of Dawn with Kit is great. Tara and Willow Rock! Especially Tara - she can be scary. Curious to know what Asher is planning he seems to have something for Xan. Anyway, as much as I love this story I could not give it a 10 rating - because it has not been updated in 2 years! Please please update soonest! I mean I know that Real Life gets in the way, or the muses take a vacation or hide in a cave, but it would be a shame to not continue this. Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Hid in a cave is the right term. I'm gonna finish off 'Cousin Xander' first, then I'll sort this one out.
I hadn't forgotten it, but I've had a serious lack of inspiration for the pair of them. But it's Cousin Xander first, then this one.
Review By [Silver
] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from wot
So, this is a great story, but I think you need a beta reader... For example, several times I noticed the phrase "I resemble that remark" which, as far as I can tell, is just incorrect. Otherwise, this is an excellent story, and I hope that you write more.
Review By [wot
] • Date [6 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from TwoBlackDragons
Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the evilest of authors.
Comments from author:
It's not quite like that. I've got a 7 month old baby, and had a very bad pregnancy. Not to mention the fact that I keep killing computers.
I'll sort out 'Cousin Xander' first, then I'll start working on this one again.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons
] • Date [10 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from LeaFairy
Pretty incredible story so far! A very interesting and entertaining read. And I'm so loving Dawn and Xander as hyena's and Xander kicking Narcissus' ass was just wonderfully awesome too. Also Willow as a kick ass necromancer is totally great. Love all of it!
Anyhoo, I really did enjoy reading this and I definitely look forward to hopefully, reading more in the future! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy
] • Date [11 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from AlecMcDowell
Damn, I was really enjoying what you've got here. Too bad you never finished!
Review By [AlecMcDowell
] • Date [7 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "2 Minutes to Midnight" from oldgirllost
I've read this about three times now and have been waiting for an update for quite a while. I know updates fall into the black holes of life sometimes but is there any chance of one????
Thanks for a good story in any case.
Review By [oldgirllost
] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from LovinXovers
excellent cn't wait 4 more
Review By [LovinXovers
] • Date [9 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from Darkblood
i love it we want more please ;)
Review By [Darkblood
] • Date [31 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from Alien
Aah finally found that another update has been made - missed it only by 5 months :)
But that makes me miss new update that much more ... hint hint :)
Nice chapter, liked the part when Tara told them that they will do it their way.
And Xander`s muttering - plausible deniability
Review By [Alien
] • Date [16 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hell and Consequences" from Blend
Found this while browsing answered challenges. Excellent piece. I love hyena Xander, and the fact you were able to keep all the characters realistic despite the restrictions of the challenge is wonderful.
Hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I should be starting to work on the next chapter soon. Had a slight case of, "Oh Christ, what did I do with my notebook?!" going on recently. Found it under the kitchen scales when I was baking yesterday.
Just need to get my really late finishes out of the way, and then I'll start.
Review By [Blend
] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated