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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Netchka
Review:
Good start to the story. More coming soon I hope? Can't wait.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from serenityselena
Review:
interesting ....
hope to read more ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from spring
Review:
I like what I have read so far please update again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [14 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MistDragon
Review:
An good start, it will be interesting to see where it goes. MD
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [11 Feb 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jessie
Review:
I liked it!
Review By [jessie] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AzureChaos
Review:
very interesting story with a different take on the whole Speed getting shot incident. However, there are parts of it that are hard to follow because of missing words and odd punctuation, especially around speech. I would definitely recommend that you find a beta. If you ask on the LJ csi comms I'm sure there'll be people willing to help.

nate
Review By [AzureChaos] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Duskie
Review:
I have no idea what that last bit was. How did Eric know that Xander had been on a plane Xander didn't say. He could have driven or come by bus.
Someone pretended they were Xander, right?
They have no records of Xander, or the guy pretending to be Xander?
How does Xander know someones pretending to be him?

I like the look of your story I just don't follow your logic. Hope you continue though, maybe I'll understand better further on.
Comments from author:
I hope it will make more sense in the future. So far everything has been Xander's point of view so Only one view of what is going on. I hope the muse listens to me and lets me tell some back story or at least Speeds conversations before he was shot.
Review By [Duskie] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Althalus
Review:
Looks great.

Keep it up. I wonder what's up with the Alexander Harris they have in jail now.

I wonder how you're going to handle the Speedle situation: live or die?
Comments from author:
I have not figured that out yet you'll know when I do.
Review By [Althalus] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from angelkitty
Review:
this is so cool i cant wait to read more
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from heathenseyes
Review:
If you want some one to help you catch the snags, I am willing if you would like.

Let me know.

:)

By the way, past the few mistakes I saw, you have an interesting story there. Just hope you don't bash the characters too badly. And Speed living would rock, I hated that they killed him off.
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from axolotl
Review:
nice chapter- going with the family theme which is cool. No problem with trying to unlurker keep on going ^_^
Review By [axolotl] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Interesting concept.
When did someone pretend to be Xander? And when did Xander find out?
Your story doesn't flow very well.

And you really need to spell & grammar check
(Xander shoot his head.) ? Isn't that supposed to be "shook his head"?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KatieKat
Review:
*blinks and whimpers* awwww thats where you end it? nooooooo more more please *drops down on knees and begs*
Comments from author:
no begging needed but I'll have the next part out today
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
There are so many different ways this could go.

Such an evil teasing cliffie.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from traceyw
Review:
oh different ! i like the idea of this cross... does Tim survive...please let him i think hes brilliant. cant wait for the next update Tracey
Review By [traceyw] • Date [4 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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