Review of chapter "Convergence" from WolfWriter
Really great story.
But the ending just leaves you hanging.
I was kind of hoping that Mr. Parker would finally get his, go to hell, and that the Centre would go out with a resounding "BOOM!"
So not fair.
Review By [WolfWriter
] • Date [1 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convergence" from Sulien
Well, that was a non-ending if ever there was one. I was greatly enjoying the story up to that point and I hope you decide to complete it eventually.
Review By [Sulien
] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convergence" from LadyCarpathian
Is this really complete? It doesn’t seem like it. It ended with “>>You have found unity. You are one. >Only together will you have victory.” It just seems like it ended partway through the battle. I hope there is more to this. If so, where can I find it??
Review By [LadyCarpathian
] • Date [5 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convergence" from zephyrRS
This is a wonderful story and I'd love to see you write more!
Review By [zephyrRS
] • Date [30 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Convergence" from Anonymous Reviewer
This is a great story but is it really completed? It seems to be a bit of a cliff-hanger. Will there be a sequel?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [29 Jul 03] • Not Rated