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Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from macalaarmstrong
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Hello,
I love this story so much. There isn't alot of Buffy/Edward stories out there and this is definitely a wonderful story to fill up the needed pairing section. You are such a wonderful writer. Everything you write is so vivid and the way you weave your words together creates such a beautiful picture. The only thing that makes me sad is that it seems that so many of your stories or series are left unfinished and I really want to know what happens. This story has actually gotten me insterested in the Anita Blake/Buffy fanfictions (I never knew what Anita Blake was before this story) and it is such a great section to be introduced to. I beg you to finish this story and all your other stories and series that are unfinished they are all to beautiful to not be completed. You are by far my favorite author of all times when it comes to fanfiction (to any body of works published or fanfictions) you are so amazing and I just can't help but gush over you and your works of art. So, again I beg you to please update this story and all your stories and series that are not yet finished soon. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
Hello,
I have loved every one of your stories so far and I really hope you decide to update all of them. You have written three of my favorite series and all the other stories are awesome as well. You are an amazing writer and I don't know how many times I can tell you that with out being too much of a suck up haha. Update soon please. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from leelaa
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Superb writing as always. The BtVS characters practically come alive through the words, the characterization is terrific. Hope you do find the time and inspiration for a prequel and/or sequel at some point. Thanks for writing this fic.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [12 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from Sandi
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That is very scary.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [11 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from laoshi
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Switching perspective from Buffy to Dawn works very well. Her view of their relationship allows us to gain insights we otherwise would not. You paint a picture of both Buffy and Edward that explores there flaws while retaining an underling sympathy for both characters. The characterization of Dawn is spot on and you give her some great lines like the one about catching Giles ordering tweed for Rupert. “I also really liked And maybe it's not exactly my cup of chai to watch her get closer and closer to a guy who's so messed up inside that it's really almost anticlimactic that he's only a sociopath.” Dawn’s new found altruism when it comes to Buffy is endearing and you do a fantastic job conveying a sense of foreboding. I really hope that one day you’ll start writing this story again. For the record I’m one of the two people who has recommended it.

I’d just like to close with a plea. It would mean a lot to me if you could respond to my reviews. Even if it is just a one word thank you. I understand entirely that responding to every review isn’t necessarily feasible or desirable. But you’ve posted these stories on this site because you want to share them with others. The least we can do is do say a few words about what we thought of your efforts. Surely the whole point of this site is to encourage interaction between readers and writers. I just don’t understand why you don’t ever respond to reviews? Well, at least not any of mine. I have three of your stories on my recommended list and I plan on reviewing them all. But I find the lack of any acknowledgment from you to be very discouraging. Thank you for your consideration.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Glass" from laoshi
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I enjoyed the suffocating mothering from all of the Scoobies at the beginning. You write a wonderful description of Buffy going to sleep with the baby. It’s Interesting way to blur the line between dream and reality. I’ve never read Frank Beddor but I feel that reading anything about Hatter Madigan outside this story would somehow lesson the character. I love the way you extend the simile of his eyes looking like knives. Bringing in Edward as Buffy’s new love interest is an inspired move, he works so much better than any of the BTVS characters would have. I really admire your economy with words and that last line: “The ring bit into her flesh, a promise that burned like magic.” is great writing.

There’s one small typo: you meant to say this time he meant what he said; Buffy could hear it but you have was instead of what.
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from Amai
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Very interesting. I have no idea what's going on, but I'm very curious.

I really hope you continue
Review By [Amai] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from heathenseyes
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Interesting. Looking forwards to more.
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from Hecatonchires
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I meant to mention earlier - the mirror of her dreams - highly underficced as far as I'm concerned!
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from BlameyFomorrii
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"It's not like I didn't see how paranoid she got, how quiet she was those few days before she finally told us she was with pod."
---I like how you write Dawn here. She's the one who is close enough to see a glimpse of why Buffy needs Edward.

"That all stopped when Edward showed up, though. I still don't know the details of how they met—except that it was bloody. Apparently she impressed him enough that when we got home that night, me with my paper to write and her covered in entrails, he was sitting on our couch, waiting, a gun pointed at Buffy's head."

---Aww! So romantic!

"But, really, all I can think about is how she doesn't wake up screaming in the night anymore.

He makes her feel safe. It's insane and completely heartbreaking, but there it is.

Not even Angel did that."
---yay Dawn. Love her so much here!

"Because, sometimes, I look into Rupert's black eyes and think I see someone else looking back.

Because even though there are no leaks, even though I can't find a single dripping faucet, there are puddles everywhere in our apartment.

Because I look into the mirror, into any of the few mirrors we have left, and I think I see more than just my reflection.

Because there is a new ring on Buffy's finger, shining gold and luminous blue, and the old ghosts fill her eyes.

Someone is watching. I have to be ready.

I'll protect her. Edward will protect her. Between the two of us, we'll keep her safe, keep her here, keep her ours.

No matter who comes."

---I think I love this bit of the chapter the best. Who, exactly, is Madigan? Is he the same person who took Buffy and got her "with pod"? I'm assuming he/it is a Anita Blake character, since that's sort-of what you have the story listed under.

I really can't wait for more, please.
Review By [BlameyFomorrii] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from (Recent Donor)BuffyCharmed
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Oh I love it! So glad you're continuing this and I can't wait for an update.
Review By [(Recent Donor)BuffyCharmed] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from SassyFrass
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What the freak is going on? I suppose it might make more sense if I knew who Harry M. was. As always, your stories are totally fascinating, even when I have no clue as to what's happening. Update again soon.
Review By [SassyFrass] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from Drix
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Oh, I really love this. I never read the comic book that madigan is from, but I can't wait for him to appear. Any place you know that I could find out more about his character?
Review By [Drix] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Looking" from (Past Donor)specs
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interesting chapter, please continue.
Review By [(Past Donor)specs] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Glass" from Christy
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wha? confusing much? and I'm sorry but that's HIGHLY out of character for Edward to act as you've written him.
Review By [Christy] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Rating [6 out of 10]
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