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On the Brink of Something Great

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ashez
Review:
Buy More... isn't that from the show Chuck?
Comments from author:
Indeed. I love that show.
Review By [ashez] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
I'm very glad you thinks so. Thanks a bunch.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dargos
Review:
So Xander feels sorry for himself and meets Anya.Story is too short.

I have never understood why Xander came back to Sunnydale after Graduation.There is nothing for him.
Comments from author:
The point of the story was that Xander was depressed, but his girlfriend was able to cheer him up. That was it. It's a little more "O.C." than I usually go for, but I really liked the idea of Xander standing outside of Anya's door and claiming he was the Meehoo and that was the reasoning I came up with.

As for whether or not there's anything for him in Sunnydale, I've always assumed he went back for his friends, the family that he'd chosen for himself. So they don't treat him like they could, they still love him and he knows it. They're just showing it in all the wrong ways. Which isn't fun granted, but it's no reason for him to leave and never return.

Of course, you're entitled to your own thoughts and opinions regarding Xander and his treatment by the other Scoobies. Just remember this. If the writers felt the same as you, Xander would've been written out and not on the show anymore.

Thank you very much for your review and I'm looking forward to hearing from you again.
Review By [Dargos] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
Review:
not bad at all.

Poor Xander, this is another of the fic where i feel for him without it being too much.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I definitely found it difficult to get that balance. You should've seen my first draft. Xander went on a twenty minute diatribe about how nobody likes him anymore and everybody was ignoring him. To top it off, the dialog was awful. So yeah. That went right out the metaphorical window.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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