Just discovered this. I like how you have Elizabeth getting flashes of memories from her previous life as Buffy. Can't wait to see how that comes into play later. I did want to point out one problem in chapter 1: After Izzie gives birth, you have a time jump of "10-1/2 years later", yet in Izzie's explanation of Elizabeth's birth, she says that it was 7 years ago. It seems to me that she would need to say it happened 10 years ago. :)
Comments from author:
thanks, im glad you liked it!
as for the confusion with the years, that's totally my fault. at one point i did have it at 6 1/2 - 7 years but decided that that didnt make sense so i changed it all to 10. Guess i missed a spot, thanks for letting me know!
:) shelby :)
Review By [spk] • Date [28 Mar 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
You've hit the characters personalities right on the head. Perfect. The only problem is that your timeline wouldn't work for college and medical school. If Izzie had Buffy when she was sixteen, and it's not quite seven years later, then Izzie is only 22 or 23. She'd still have to be in college or in her first year of med school. Assuming she graduated high school at the normal age of 18, spent four years as and undergrad at college, and then another four years in med school, then she'd be 26.
Review By [KatieKate] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I've never seen Grey’s Anatomy but I always like stories where Buffy has been reborn as a child with slayer powers.
I hope you will continue this story.
But you've made a mistake with the eye colors if Buffy is a baby she has brown eyes "She’d held the baby for over an hour, just staring into the little brown eyes of her daughter." And later on she has green eyes “Yeah. Just look at the kid. She looks exactly like Izzie. The blonde hair, the green eyes. It’s freaky.”
Comments from author:
thanks for pointing it out!! i like to write but i'm the most horrible proofreader in the world . . . i'll fix it right away.
Review By [Voldemort] • Date [7 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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