I think you did a terrific job of capturing Anakin's thoughts. Anakin doesn't seem to do anything half-way and how you have him deciding from the first time he saw her that he was going to end up with her is great. The relationship does seem different then the one with Padme because he didn't seem so concerned with knowing everything about her. I would love to see a sequel.

Yet again, the lack of a prequel is very much felt. :) As always, terrific writing. The characterization and POV are superbly done. Hope you do find the time and inspiration for a prequel at some point. Thank you so much for writing this fic.

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OMG! I completely love this. The tone, the overall mood and look into Anakins head is all great. I so hope that you decide to continue this. I would love to find out what happened to bring her there and take her away. All the lovely details. GREAT JOB.

someones has an obsession

Aw, I want to know what happened! ;) Darn. Did she travel to Kotor's time? Because that's the only Canderous that I can think of...
Creepy Anakin- which means he's perfectly in character lol.
How is Qui Gon alive?
So many questions!
Great story.

Yay for Anakin and Buffy! Love your work, especially the Lord of the Rings fics but the Buffy/Kirril pairings are shaping up quite nicely as well. Keep it up. Also, unlike most people, I'm a grammer freak so let me know if you need any grammer checks.

-Z

Very good. I desperately want to get the full story, but it's a very good stand alone piece.

Excellent. Anakin's voice was just perfect and you've opened up the door to a lot of possibilities of where this could go. Please continue!

This is a great piece, amazing and chillingly beautiful, i am a fan of the pairing and I love the way you wrote Anakin, I sincerely hope you do more because I will defintely be looking out for it.

I can't do grammar to save my life but I do beta so if you want me to look at anything email it my way. Also, I don't know if you are a Supernatural fan but if you are or have seen the show there is a great little community that is very supportive.

http://route66sd.proboards78.com/index.cgi

It is a Buffy/Dean Winchester community and the people are all really great. If you're not still email, I love to chat about fanfiction and this story was much fun to read.

"Buffy was meant for him. He'd known it since the very first moment he'd seen her, in the Dune Sea of Tatooine..

One more year."

---Anakin has a bit of an obsession. You can hear a faint sound of darkness even now in his words and thoughts.

I don't usually read Buffy/Star Wars *mostly because not many of the fics can catch my attention* but this one was nice. I want to hear more from this story line.
...
But not at the expense of the Buffy/LoTR story line, please.

I don't like this pairing personally because it completely voids his destiny to sire the twins with Padme.....So no episode 4 through 6!

Man, your 'speaking' voice is completely different from your 'story-telling' voice, which is awesome.

Your stories are generally told in a calm and reverential tone. Acheron is an exception as your voice there is upbeat and at a faster pace. I was surprised at the shift, but now I've found that you have a completely separate one...

I've one main style, my stories come out sounding pretty as much I do when I'm speaking, or writing an e-mail.

Seeing that you have - at least - three distinct styles makes me even more impressed with your work.


There, that's said, now let me read the story...

Huh. How'd Jinn survive Naboo?

First off, I want more, I wanna know what's going on darn it!! It's lovely, and I just wish I knew more of the story, 'cause it would only make it better.
I'm willing to be a beta, but I warn you that I can't guarantee speed at all, 'cause I already do a lot of editing at my job. But if you need help, I'll totally give it.

More soon please!

That was good. I was thinking it would be a Buffy Quigonn Jinn pairing there for a while. and perhaps it is, is that what is gonna send Ani down the dark path? I can't be a beta, my grammar sucks. but I am willing to chat fanfiction when ever if you want to.