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NLTZ: A Gangrel in the City of Angels

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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Fayari
Review:
I seriously don't like Angel for a multitude of reasons that are perfectly legitimate but would take too long to explain. If I was Xander and Angel was talking to me like that, I would just kill him and be done with it. And barring that, make sure he doesn't mess with me.
Comments from author:
Um? Thank you??? I'm really confused here...Are you pissed at my story or pleased? Or neither?

Cheers!
Shannon
Review By [Fayari] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Obsidian
Review:
Very good story. I like where your going with it. Looking forward to reading the rest, thanks.
Comments from author:
No, thank you!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from mendenbar
Review:
Actually, Liam's father was a merchant of means, not a landowner. And since they only had one servant, they were only comfortable, not well off. And he was definitely Catholic as was specifically mentioned in one of the episodes (forget which one and don't want to bother watching all of them just for that.)
Comments from author:
Oh, well, okay, but I stand behind my reasoning using historical fact. Yes, I totally see your point if you go purely from Joss-verse, but in reality, 'Liam's' social, financial, and religious status really doesn't match up to historical accounts. Also, I had a good time writing Wes and Angel going at each other like women at an Irish Fest. But anyways, thank you for reading and reviewing. It is appreciated. Take care!
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [7 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from MamaLadyWolf
Review:
I enjoyed the whole story thank you for posting it. I found it well written or typed as it were and very enjoyable. Thank you again.
Comments from author:
Thank you very much. I am glad your found it enjoyable. Take care!
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Infinix
Review:
Very nice. I've been waiting since chapter one for Xander to start taunting Angel and his sun challenged pig eating ways. The story just wouldn't have been complete without it.
Comments from author:
Thank Lorilei for it. The sun things was her idea and I ran with it. It really cracked me up. The pig eating ways came from me...and this weird train of though about wht kind of blood would a member of the Kindred would never stoop to drinking. I have weird thoughts sometimes (and the peanut gallery choruses: duh). Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Infinix] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from mithrilandtj
Review:
LOL

"I'm in, I'm out, I'm in, I'm out!"

Good story!
Comments from author:
Like I said earlier, Lorilei had a lot to do with the mocking Angel with the sun bit. It really cracked me up. Glad you liked it. Thank you very much!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Bumpkin
Review:
LMAO - "~Now I'm in the sun, now I'm not - Now I'm in the sun, Now I'm not.~"- Oh god I can so see Xander doing that to get Angel's goat, showing him that even as a vampire he still has the sun. Lol and grumpy Wes *g* I could see him shooting Xander after the one warning "Cease and desist, I'm only giving you one warning or..." and whammo, out comes the projectile weapon. Heh.

Lovely wrap up, very satisfying read. Thank you so much for sharing.
keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Comments from author:
I have to give credit where credit is due. While talking to Lorilei, she had the thoguht of how funny it would be to have Alex taunt Angel like this. According to her, its based on something from MASH (I really didn't watch the show all that much growing up). When she mentioned it, I just had the vision of Alex/Xander bouncing in and out of the sun, mocking Angel. It seemed so right.

Thank you for your thoughts and pushing me to post over here. You were right. Take care and have a wonderful and blessed day. Cheers!
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
*Claps girlishly in a Dru-like manner.* Yay for another AleXander the Kindred story! Shorter than the others but still just as wonder.
Comments from author:
AleXander..haha. Dru...humm...ideas, ideas. Her kitten has claws now after all. Oh crap...plot bunnies are suddenly springing up everywhere.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. You know its appreciated.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Dragonelf
Review:
I am looking forward to read the next part in the series.

@>-,-`-,---
Comments from author:
You are too sweet. The next story will be along sometime. I have an idea, but nothing fleshed out just yet.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Thewander
Review:
very nice ending, cant wait for the next NLTZ story
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Comments from author:
Thank you...oh boy, the next story *looks worried*

But still, thanks as always for reading and reviewing.
Review By [Thewander] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Dragonelf
Review:
Xander shouldn't be allowed to sing until he has learned how to do it properly and he is lucky that Lillie Langtry didn't hear him sing.

::Feeds the NLTZ series plot bunny::
Comments from author:
Its not his fault he's Gangrel and not Toreador. Not everyone can be an artist.

*eyes plot bunny with an evil eye*

Thanks!!!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Dragonelf
Review:
I have just feed Tao's "NLTZ: Hunted" plot bunny.

Well you made think of Bugs Bunny by mentioning deer season.

::Gives ShannonK's muse a jar of encouragement cookies and then feeds her NLTZ series plot bunnies::
Comments from author:
So what you are really saying is that on some level we are connected mentally/ psychically??? You poor thing...

Oh...cookies! Now I am thinking of Cookie Monster. You cause my mind to wander way too much. Hopefully it will be able to wander its way out of the gutter at some point...
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Bumpkin
Review:
Only one more chapter? No say it isn't so! .... :D

Seriously, I am gonna miss this lighthearted romp - it's been a fun interlude in this 'verse and I was very happy to read it. I can also see why it's only gonna be one last chappie - really isn't much left to say is there. Looking forward to seeing that last one tho. :)

keep penning,
Marns
~pN
Comments from author:
Yeah, there isn't much more to say here is there. But there is something. Just a little something, but to me, its important. Plus we have to have a good-bye between the AtS gang and Alex. You are right. It was a light hearted romp. I needed the funnies for a while. Thanks once again and I will catch you later. As always, have a wonderful and blessed day.

Cheers!
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Rebelgirl
Review:
Sweet, wicked of Cordelia to offer the cretin's up for Alex for dinner though.

But I can't say that I know much about his choice of song for the shower, I attempted twice to watch the Rocky Horror Picture Show, and I couldn't get my head round it, so ya stumped me there.

But cool chapter anyway.

Cushty!
Comments from author:
Oh you sweet thing...you couldn't get your head round TRHPS? You aren't really supposed to. Maybe its best if you watch it in a theatre (do they even do that anymore) or at least with a group of people. The music at least is great. Anyways, glad you liked the chapter. Have a wonderful and blessed day.

Cheers!
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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