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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from lucyferr
Review:
good trial
good ship
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from lucyferr
Review:
Oh good scene! Glad Joe didnt die a quick death... coulda been slower, of course...
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from lucyferr
Review:
Buffy gets killed - that makes a change. Cool. About it being different I mean (like the earth blowing up at the *start* of Hitchikers), not coz of it it (sic) yknow?
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from spring
Review:
Wonderful.
Review By [spring] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from axolotl
Review:
Does a happy dance for future potential and good ending. Yay!
Review By [axolotl] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from heathenseyes
Review:
I enjoyed it, once I got past you killing Buffy....

O_O

And I liked that Faith served jail-time, it was realistic for her having murdered Joe, especially good with the realitvely short jail period. And I thought your open ending worked rather well, the party with the other CSIs and the Scoobs was a nice touch. A perfect ending to part one. Don't suppose we'll get to see a Faith/Calliegh sequel coming up any time soon?

:)

Edit: Well, with how you were going with the story, there seemed to be a budding bond between the two women...

Plus, even though they have heigth differences, I could see Faith starting to see Cal and getting close to her, and the CSI beginning to wonder if Faith was simply with her because she reminded the Slayer of Buffy, which of course she wouldn't and all, but still. And I really would look forwards to the CSI:Miami team learning about the supernatural and now that I've gone off on a tangent I'll shut up. This is me going mute....

LOL :O)
Comments from author:
Yeah.. the killing Buffy thing shook me too when I realized I actually killed her...
You're the second one who wants me to pair Faith with Calleigh...
Maybe when I get inspired for a sequel I could give it a try...
Thanks for reviewing ^^

Edit: there was a budding bond between the two women. I wanted them to be friends and in another version of this fic I did pair them but I got stuck with the other version so I wrote another one where I got stuck as well and that's when this version came out. Okay, I'm rambling just a little.

I'll give it some serious thought and just maybe I'll do a sequel with Faith/Calleigh (knowing me I'll have a draft for a sequel ready by next week because I'm a sucker for sequels)

Anyway, going to shut up now
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from WinterRayne
Review:
loved it !!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
This was really well written... you was able to capture the raw emotions well and you had everyone reacting very realistically.
Good work!


Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dargos
Review:
There was no reason for Faith to go to jail.Scoobies do not care about human laws and Willow could have destroyed all evidence with magic (or transformed cops to rats).
Review By [Dargos] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from CPTSkip
Review:
I liked your "open ending". Your story actually had an upbeat ending and I thank you for that. This was a well written story with excellent characterization and filled with real emotion. Thanks for letting us enjoy your Faith and her friends.
Comments from author:
I just couldn't just let it stop with Faith going to jail...
Thank you so much for your review, it makes my sleepdeprivation easier to deal with knowing that something good came out of it ^^
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Stone
Review:
Hi,

An interesting end to the story. Didn't like killing Buffy, but the way the story went it fitted and flowed. Sad but true ending. Don't like Faith's father, and it sort all made sense, and gave her a fitting background to her life before the show.

Thank you for posting.
Review By [Stone] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
My main problem with this fic was the whole Faith/Buffy lovers thing! took awhile to get my head 'round that.

Otherwise I though you'd written a good fic which I enjoyed a lot. I'm not a great fan of CSI Miami but I generally like CSI fics and this was a good addition. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up with the writing.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Nice wrap up. Really enjoyed the whole story. Not a lawyer, and given the torture of Mr. Lehane, I'm glad she got some prison time, but I think even that could have been beaten. Still, big thumbs up!
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from axolotl
Review:
aww, Lucky break for Faith, and I like that there is still prison time, makes it work better seems right even if wrong.
Will there be a calleigh/faith relationship sequel?
Review By [axolotl] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent work, even if it was quite sad. At least Faith and Buffy had two years. Sigh. Since we know in the Buffyverse there is a heaven, I am sure they will be together again. But hopefully not for a while.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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