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Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from DrDamage
Having read the rest of this series, I decided to add a recommendation. Any story with Xander slash that I actually _like_ REALLY has something going for it.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [12 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from amusewithaview
I'm not rating this because while it is a good beginning, to me it's just that - a good beginning. I got to the end and had to reload my browser because half of me was going, 'Where's the rest of the fic?!'

Aside from that: good intro, good execution. The whole thing flows so well that there were actually a few passages I re-read just for the pleasure of mulling the phrasing over once again. It read like expositional poetry and I would absolutely LOVE a sequel.

There aren't enough MG-fics on here!

Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Hey, I really enjoyed your writing style. It's unique. The links are useful - especially 'behind the name'.

Huh, when you use 'I' in the first paragraph, do ya mean yourself as the author, or from the perspective of an omniscent narrator, or an undisclosed viewpoint character?

Just curious :)
Comments from author:
Actually, that was written from Xander's viewpoint.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter the Only" from Rebelgirl
That's our Xan, seeing beyond the bullshit. Nice little story, can totally see Rhys and Xander getting pissed on gin, (evil tasting swill, and that's just the tonic that my mum put's in it!)

Are you gonna leave it there or do a follow up, because this has got potential.

Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [9 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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