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Review of chapter "One little Candle" from Elissiaro
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I really liked this! Aside from the spelling errors... But who cares about the spelling if the story is good, I would totally recc this but I don't have room and I don't want to delete anything from my recc list... I'll recc if I can find it again in April. :)
Review By [Elissiaro] • Date [9 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from falsegod
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a truly great story, nay a masterpiece of the written word.

it would please me greatly if you would consider a sequel
Review By [falsegod] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from buggycas
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So good!!! and I don't see why you're complaining about not having a Beta, you don't seem to NEED a Beta. Your Spelling and Grammar are better then most Beta'd Fics. I LOVED how this Story went, I'm Glad you wrote it.
Review By [buggycas] • Date [20 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from tonnocal
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The things I loved about this story were the concept - Evil!xander, Hocus Pocus cross and all that Jazz, however I sort of petered out towards the end. I didn't feel that the relationships the characters were in - Xander/Spike, Ethan/Giles/Winnie had enough baring on the story. Essentially, the character, other than Xander, weren't developed enough to carry my interest. Maybe if you make them eviler? It would also have been awesome to have some more development of Willow, who in canon has shown herself to be highly susceptible to evil. Also - Anya meets mommy Sanderson, enough said.

Initially, where I thought you were going was to have Xander/the Sanderson Sisters as servants/avatars of the First Evil, with a whole sleeper cell side gig for Xander. That was why I didn't like the way you ended, mainly because it felt like you'd had bigger dreams and then inspiration fizzled. I mean you killed Buffy in like a paragraph! The champion for good! Taken out in as much space as you spent on toys in earlier chapters. So yeah - the middle half of the story I liked the best.

All that being said - this story is still better than 95% of what gets posted, and a lacklustre ending beats no ending at all.
Review By [tonnocal] • Date [3 Oct 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from BuffyKaibaHunt
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Brilliant! :) Very well-written. :)
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [27 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from ManyNamedChibi
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I just re-read this and is was as wonderful as the first time. But I'm curious. What happened to Willow, Angelus, and Dru?
Review By [ManyNamedChibi] • Date [27 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from Shulik
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SOoooo much love it's not even funny!

I bow down to your twisted, twisted imagination :)
Review By [Shulik] • Date [20 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One litte Session" from HebiR
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This chapter? Right here? TEN. Definate TEN. I absolutely loved Angelus' therapy session.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [15 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One litte Session" from HebiR
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This chapter? Right here? TEN. Definate TEN. I absolutely loved Angelus' therapy session.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [15 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from Omegaprime
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Wow... just wow. This is a good story and Xander turned out really good... er ah evil in this story. I also like how he played both sides of the field. Are you going to make a sequel?


Keep up the good work... or should I say evil. LOL
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [12 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from lothlorien
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brilliant story. i loved it. don't know how you came up with the plot, but it's fantastic.
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from darkwwwish
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loved it :D just so you know the story is listed as unfinished, Completed [No] ,see?


Just a Bunch of Hocus Pocus
Young Xander lights a candle. Slash, child abuse/neglect mentioned, some torture
Only the author can add chapters to this story Movies > Hocus Pocus • Sio • FR18 • Chapters [27] • Words [37,570] • Recs [15] • Reviews [348] • Hits [54,932] • Published [9 Nov 07] • Updated [31 Oct 08] • Completed [No]
Review By [darkwwwish] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One little Lie" from darkwwwish
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ewwww! Xander never eat anyone that is dying from sickness!! ewww!
Review By [darkwwwish] • Date [12 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from TouchoftheWind
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And they all lived happily ever after, except of course for those that died a horrible death, but who cares about them?

Ha! Loved that ending!

It was wonderful! I would like to see more of Giles, Ethan and Winnie...and also what happened to Willow...maybe Angelus and Dru turned her...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "One little Invitation" from discordlives
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This was an awesome story! I really enjoyed it! The only thing that I didn't like was that there were a bunch of spelling mistakes... Other than that it was very entertaining.

~DL
Review By [discordlives] • Date [21 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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