Review of chapter "Discarding Pretenses (Dawn Summers/Jarod)" from
GundumMReview:
nice
Review By [
GundumM] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Discarding Pretenses (Dawn Summers/Jarod)" from
linkReview:
I like Chapter 2 and 3. I feel Graham will do well in SGC. It will be hard for a soldier to beat Slayers in term of strength. Not to mention male ego definitely will be bruised. It's better for them to go to SGC. I was amused at Carter reaction too. Overall, I enjoyed you FFA.
Review By [
link] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Recruiting 2 (Graham Miller/Samantha Carter)" from
RocksandGlassReview:
This is good, but I have one little nit-picking point: by the time Landry is around, it is Lt. Colonel Carter. She was only Captain for the first couple of seasons. I don't know if you did that on purpose as part of your story (in which case I apologize for pointing it out) or if you didn't notice.
Review By [
RocksandGlass] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Recruiting (Graham Miller/Cameron Mitchell)" from
mithrilandtjReview:
Interesting
Was Gua'ld a deliberate error? It's supposed to be Goa'uld
Check the Stargate info at:
http://www.gateworld.net/omnipedia/index.shtmlReview By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting a Houshi (Cordelia/Miroku)" from
ShieldageReview:
Well, sweet. She should make him deliriously happy until his friends get suspicious as to where his good advice is coming from... Maybe even going so far as to find a ritual so they could climb inside his head while he'd dreaming ;)
Hmm, as far as Naruto crossovers go, I kinda think spaceman's Challenge 2924 would be a cool one to meet :)
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
