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Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from Jiltanith
Review:
I've just discovered this story; and it's been three years since it was posted so I don't suppose that there's much hope, but I do want more!

A very intriguing beginning! Please, continue!

(Heck, I'll even beta if you need it!)
Review By [Jiltanith] • Date [28 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from mikerich
Review:
it is a good start .but it has been almost 2 years since you posted i hope you plan on finishing this story or you put it up for adoption.
Review By [mikerich] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from Danu
Review:
Interesting so far. I hope this continues & your hardware problem gets fixed.
I haven't had a good Doc Savage story in a long time.
Please keep up the good work.
Stephni/Danu40k
Review By [Danu] • Date [30 Jan 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from purrfus
Review:
Looks like it could be lots of fun.

So ... who are you visualizing in the parts of Doc and his gang? The Ron Ely movie version gave Doc pretty colors, and a nice car, but really didn't make it for me.
Comments from author:
::heh:: They're already having fun in my head LOL

Actually, I'm not from America. I only know Doc Savage from the pulp fiction novels that were available on the net for a while, and comic book covers. So I never saw that movie.

I kinda picture him with a body like Michelangelo's David, but a bit wider in the shoulders. Longer hair. A warm voice. Oh heck, it's hard to put into words and I'm a lousy artist so you'll have to use your own imagination. Oh the hardship! LOL

Thanks for the review, I'll look for that movie. Might be fun.

Angel
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from Morrigan
Review:
you...you... evil you! You can't kidnap the next chapter! inquiring minds needs to know what happens with the brunet duo T___T

*snort* Well, even if I'd never read Doc Savage (nor heard of it), I'll be faithfully looking for a new chapter (specially since there's so little influx of slash lately)

Ta mate! XD
Comments from author:
::cackles:: It is mine, all mine!!!

Nah, I'm actually quite willing to post Chapter 2, but RL threw me a curveball and I have to deal with that before I can polish the chapter. I also have a line on someone who's willing to give the story a once-over
::prostrates self in gratitude::
and I'd like that to happen before I post anything else.

(this, b.t.w. is a call to all you beta's out there willing to help. I'm a glutton for punishment. ::grins:: and I don't want to put all the burden on one person. They might decide to run LOL)

There needs to be more slash. Nay, there needs to be more Xander slash! If people don't start appreciating the chocolaty goodness of a good Xander, I'm kidnapping him and keeping him in my closet. Heck, I may just do that anyway! LOL

Thanks for letting me know what you think,
Angel
Review By [Morrigan] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from MarcusRowland
Review:
Interesting start. Seems a little unlikely that Xander would identify it so fast, but I suppose it's necessary for the plot. Why the fifties? Doc Savage did most of his crime fighting in the thirties and forties.
Comments from author:
Thanks. You know, you're right. I actually fixed that plothole in a later version of the story, but I kinda forgot. ::hits head in typical Homer Simpson fashion:: Such is the agony of loosing most of your stories in a crash. I'm gonna correct it, thanks for the heads up.

And you're right again on the era, I knew Doc was earlier than that, but it was late and I was battling the technology as it was. ::hangs head in shame:: I won't do it again.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, I'll definitely correct the mistakes by next post.

Angel
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from FlitShadowflame
Review:
interesting looking story. I've never heard of Doc Savage, but I'm usually open to Xander slash...hope that's what you had in mind.
Comments from author:
Yup, Xandery goodness, definitely in the stars. LOL

As for Doc Savage, think of a guy that looks like a bronze statue come to life, kinda like Batman in that he's human (by canon) but trained really hard. Just not with the whole broody bat attitude.

I'll try to update as soon as possible, but what do you know, I start a project and RL trows me a curveball. So it might be a bit longer than a few days before you get the continuation.

Thanks for letting me know what you think,
Angel
Review By [FlitShadowflame] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Dental Work" from heathenseyes
Review:
Interesting. Or rather...intriguing. I enjoyed your beginning and I wasn't expecting it to be Faith and Xander, but nice twist and that's certainly a different way for them to be taken through the swirly portal. LOL.
Comments from author:
::grins::
Glad you liked it. It still needs to be tweaked, but this story's been one of my favourites for a while now. I just hope I can continue it without reverting to clich├ęs. (really, how many rituals are there causing interdimensional travel? LOL)

Thanks for the review, I hope I won't let you down.
Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [11 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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