Wonderful story!!! I really enjoyed this although the ending brought tears to my eyes.
I do hope they get it right next time, but that's the problem with time travel... too many uncontrollable variables. And Alec's going to have a harder time convincing Maxie they belong together than she did since she's so much more stubborn that him. But I have no doubt they'll end up together one way or another.
What do you mean "end"?! That was no end, lady, not one bit. I literally had to scroll up and see that it said "completed" before I realized it was really finished. She can't be dead, she just can't! Sequel, I say, sequel!
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapters.
The new chapters appears to be posted in their entirety as they both ends with a "TBC" as usual.
::Gives the plot bunny some Black Forest cake with extra chocolate::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from heathernae
Review:
NO you can't leave it there! Just when it got really really good, ok I guess you can leave it there but please update soon and not leave me without knowing whats going to happen for to long.
Comments from author:
did you see all 9 pages? it hasn't beeen loading but i think i fixed it so re-check that chapter :0)
Review By [heathernae] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [6 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Wow! Really enjoyed this fic so far, especially the characterization of Alec and his self-jealousy and -doubts & the changes to Max. I also liked that the timeline changes weren't all positive. Temporal messing about ("saving" the past especially) is more complicated than we assume & I'm glad you put that in here.
One nitpick - this isn't actually a BtVS crossover & that should be noted in the fic category/ summary header. (I don't know how, but s/one here does!)
I look forward to reading more!
Comments from author:
it was listed as a non-crossover but they got rid of that option to have it in a seperate are, however the NON-CROSSOVER option was selected so my butt is indeed covered there ;0).
Review By [jennzabelle] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
******************************************* Shadow is the diminution alike of light and of darkness, and stands between darkness and light. -- Leonardo da Vinci *******************************************
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Not Rated
*grins* I love it!!! I love Alec! He's such a smart-ass, but he's just so hott, you have to forgive him!
Hey, I just noticed...You have the pairing for this as 'MA'...Is that for 'Max/Alec' or 'Mature Audiences'? LOL Sorry, I saw that and couldn't help myself.
I can't wait to read more!
~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [20 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]