That was really short, but it made up for it's shortness with the passion and the intensity you've maneged build up. It takes a really talent to manege to say so much in so little words... Good job...
*fans self, with a big wide grin* Oh. This was very nice. I have to say that it is very good writing when you can keep them in character even during the sex. :-D I enjoyed Riley's thoughts. It was very real. That you can find something good and strong and pure without it being all flowers and courting, can find it during bad times. In my mind it but a definite line between him and Buffy and what he and Dean could have. I am so going to cross my fingers in rooting for him! For them. And I have to say the title is very apropos. :-)
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I really love this verse. It means a lot to me and I don't want to mess it up. I struggled with it for a long time. Went through a couple different drafts, a couple different approachs of Dean with Riley and this is what I settled on (just kinda jumping in). I may go back and do backstory, but I don't feel like I necessarily need to.
And don't worry, it won't be all flowers, roses and sunshine but I have a very good feeling these two boys will pull through just fine.
Thanks again!
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I love the verse idea you set up with this fic. Seeing Riley and Dean bond in such a horrible place almost makes up for the horrible place. Almost.
Did I mention at any time that I love the info you placed in about their mouths and how they haven't had toothbrushes and toothpaste in forever... Just one of those little details that is nice to read.
Kudos!
(3 down, 97 to go)
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review. I love adding in those little details because I believe it makes the characters more real - allows the reader to kinda understand their mental state just a little more.
Yay for Slash_Me_Twice!
Review By [KaylaShay] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Very poignant in a sad way. Is this season 3 for Supernatural? We haven't had it yet in England, so I'm a little behind, what with shift work.
But I like the dynamics. Very good. Are you gonna continue?
Cushty!
Comments from author:
Darn it! I knew I forgot to add something when I was getting this ready to be posted. Crap! Now I need to go back to the 101 places I've posted this and correct it. Thanks though!!
It is actually kinda AU set after Season Six of Buffy (from when Riley returns) and set before the Supernatural series. I need to go add that, otherwise no one will have any idea...
Back to thanking you for the review though: Thanks!! I'm glad you liked Riley and Dean together. Yes, I will be continuing in this verse.
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [12 Nov 07] • Not Rated