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Review of chapter "War Room" from BloodClover
Review:
Please come back to this fic, really want to know how it ends.
Review By [BloodClover] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "War Room" from MamaLadyWolf
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***BEGS*** Please, please, please update... I am dying to know what happens next. I really love this story and want to know how it ends. I can't even guess at this point. Thank you for writing and posting it in the first place.

* Gives muses and bunnies lots of sweet things *
Review By [MamaLadyWolf] • Date [27 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War Room" from Katt
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I see you are writing again Yay! and I was wondering/hoping if you had any desire to update this and Strength in Numbers? I love them as much as 'where I come from' and would love to see more when your muse wakes up :)

Katt
Review By [Katt] • Date [12 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War Room" from Dragonelf
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I have just finished rereading the story and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Cheese Pie::

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"I am Grey. I stand between the candle
and the star. We are Grey. We stand
between the darkness and the light."
- Delenn, Babylon 5
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "War Room" from JonnWolfe
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Dana is officially my favourite slayer now. I absolutely love how you got her into the Winchester's lives. I'll admit that the addition of the Masquerade threw me, but the way you handled it was well done. I only wish there were an exposition as to the differences between BuffyVamps and Kindred. Soulless v/s Undead Souls, and the whiplash that both Slayer and Winchester would have over the fact that the Kindred have souls.

Regardless, this story has set the bar for Supernatural/Slayer convergences for me. The style of writing is very well done, as is the heartache, tenderness, and actual breathing characters. Everyone is in character and I could actually hear the actors speaking when I was reading. Granted, I had no resources to pull from in hearing Kindred voices, but my brain filled in nicely anyway.

I do hope you are able to finish this story, because it's wonderful... simply wonderful.

Oh, and having Connor/Dana happen was hysterical! "Get your lips off my sister!" bahahahahahaha

I know it's been a couple of years since you've updated this, but I truly hope there is a resolution.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War Room" from Dragonelf
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You have done an awesome job so far with the story and I hope you will get inspired to update the story.


:Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "War Room" from Jinxy
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I totally spent a few hours reading this entire work last night. Very well done. Your depiction of the formation of the Winchesters' new family is excellently rendered with each character true to how they could develop according to the series of events, and very tenderly portrayed. I never thought of Dana with the Winchesters but it does seem to fit, and Faith of course is a perfect fit into their world. I only wish it was still a work that was being updated lol
Review By [Jinxy] • Date [8 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "War Room" from zabby
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great job on this story. i like the complexity of it, and the fluidity you put into it. i also love how you go into the psyche of each character and make them seem so real. this story also has gotten me interested in the Kindred that i have never really heard of before. i'm really looking forward to the final showdown you are building up to. keep up the good work. ^_^
Review By [zabby] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War Room" from FaithWinchester
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My legs are numb and my eyes are going blurry. I just read this all in one sitting and... wow... again, wow! I love this, please update again soon! Gotta say, early Dana sounded so much like Cave-Slayer Buffy from the "Beer Bad" episode! LOL Also, don't know if anyone's answered the question already but I do believe that Connor's adoptive parents' name was Reilly!
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [28 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "War Room" from Jaderose
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YAY!!!!!! You updated!!!! Thank you!!!! I hope whatever caused the story to stall is all taken care of in a happy way. Loved poor Dean and his whole how-did-I-become-the-leader-again? attitude. *cackle* Great chapter and I hope Real Life calms down enough for you to finish.
Review By [Jaderose] • Date [27 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When it Rains, it Pours" from BloodClover
Review:
Please don't abandon this story! I love it!
Comments from author:
Never planned on abandoning it. I just didn't want to finish it because it was like sending my child off to college! I have difficulty letting go...:) I am actually doing it, though, so the next chapter is going to be posted shortly!
Review By [BloodClover] • Date [19 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When it Rains, it Pours" from Ronneem
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This has taken me two full days to read. And I've enjoyed every moment of it. I have truly enjoyed the way the story begins and slowly builds. The best part is that even though I've never seen an episode of Kindred the Embraced I've been introduced in a slow, easy way that made the whole easier to understand and digest. I know it's been a long time since you've updated but I do hope that you will do so again. I'd love to see your view on how Dean and Faith lead the new and growing Clan Slayer against Azaziel.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you have enjoyed. I love writing this one and that's why I've had such a hard time wrapping it up. But, I have to finish it if I am going to write a different one-shot piece that takes place in this universe.

Truthfully, I hadn't intended to bring Kindred in, but it just felt right and I knew that I had a lot of readers who didn't know that fandom, so I would have to do it slowly. Plus, the Winchesters didn't know about them, so I just tried to give information in the way that they would learn about them.

Thank you for sticking with the story for so long!
Review By [Ronneem] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "When it Rains, it Pours" from Sempiternal
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Well then definitly not 'bad you' but 'bad computer of yours' ;)
Them living in the same city? XD not so sure about that, I meant the family thing in generall.
But I'm really curiouse if faith is going to have a fit with the kids arguing all the time! *grin*
Comments from author:
I'm not entirely sure that Faith is going to be the one dealing with them when they argue. That's when she'll probably drop them off to Grandpa John's place...:)
Review By [Sempiternal] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When it Rains, it Pours" from Sempiternal
Review:
Well, later that week doesn't seem to have worked out, huh?
But then who am I to say that? I needed how much time to review? Bad me.
Well to the chapter. Loved it... totally loved it.
Turns out, your son is more of a vanilla baby, but your daughter prefers chocolate. Do you want to know how I know?
They are already arguing with each other! It’s all they do! Forget a line of duct tape running through their nursery—they’re
going to need to live on opposite sides of the city!
I'm so loving this!! Really didn't expect the pregnancy, but now I can see it working out, and I'm really curious what Deans battle plan is.
So hoping to here from you soon,
Sempi
Comments from author:
I know, I know...bad kayariley...I'll try to work on it this weekend. I had something started, but my computer ate it and that's why I took so long. I was so ticked off about the technical problems that I was afraid I might inadvertently take it out on characters...

You think Faith and Dean's twins could actually live in the same city? :)

Thank you for reading & reviewing!
Review By [Sempiternal] • Date [13 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "When it Rains, it Pours" from SaintsGhost
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Ok, I really love this chapter. And I gotta wonder if Sam's going to be a little jealous when he learns that Dean's having kids before him.

Also this has to be the best cossover with three shows i've ever read. I love the plot and timing, and how you pay attention to all the characters. You handle a lot of characters well. Great work and I'll be waiting for your next installment. :)
Comments from author:
Your question will be answered in the next chapter I am about to post (miracle of miracles)!

Thank you very much for your kind words!
Review By [SaintsGhost] • Date [20 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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