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lillybReview:
good idea i like Xan as a white lighter
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lillyb] • Date [25 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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springReview:
^_^ I love this. I really really want to know HOW Xander ended up in the ocean it sounds like a very interesting story please tell us........ please
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spring] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Is good.
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Elleria] • Date [14 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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MichelleWinchesterReview:
I really hope your making this a series of short stories! Or even better, you can make it a whole story!!! *blinking with wide pleading puppy dog eyes *
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MichelleWinchester] • Date [9 Jan 08] • Not Rated
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DuskieReview:
Lol!
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Duskie] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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neverwillReview:
I bet instead of clearing his mind or concentrating, he started free associating and was thinking desert, sand, beach, ocean and somewhere in there his orb just followed the thought along!
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neverwill] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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BobbokyReview:
cool
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Bobboky] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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LiastraLeeReview:
Hehehe, poor Xander.
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LiastraLee] • Date [13 Nov 07] • Not Rated
