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Review of chapter "Helloween" from Vilkath
Review:
I always did like Kendra and felt she never really got the attention she deserved.. not mention utterly pathetic way she died. I mean come on heat of a battle and Dru just mind controls/hypnotizes her to the point of standing still while Dru slits her throat is a bit silly, shouldn't the slayer have resistance or immunity to a vampire power like that? If not why wasn't Buffy and countless other slayers killed that way, it's not like they are great fountains of mental strength most of the time? Add to that no one really cared or screamed vengeance over it. Sort like how spike can kill two slayers, boast about it and then be buddy buddy with everyone later.

I like the idea of Kendra being there earlier, possibly being hooked up with Xander and the first layer possession has a lot of potential to that I have not even seen used on Buffy or anything either. Not only would it give Kendra the passion she always lacked but if she can remember enough of HOW the slayer was made, that perhaps something like the ancient council shoved a demon inside a normal girl and used her like an attack dog she might even rebel.
Comments from author:
Remember the Master did something similar to Buffy at the end of Season One, Hypnotized her, then drained her and threw her in a pool of water, not saying that it didn't seem like a total cop out to kill a character but at least it was a cop out they had some background with.

Spike... well my views on Spike say he should be a villain or a reluctant hero, Angel felt bad for a hundred years after he got his soul back... Spike felt bad for what? a month or two.

and Yeah, primal possessed Kendra (With Super-Action Kung-Fu Grips...) will not likely be a big fan of the council.

I hope you enjoyed the Story.

-Tjin
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I'd really like to see more of this. It has a promising start. Especially if Xander doesn't find out until after they start dating that she's a slayer.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [5 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from LFW
Review:
Great idea and written
How much will Kendra remember?
She already had the Slayer Dream right after she was Called, so there really is some kind of connection already?
And how is she going to react to Xander now?
Looking forward to more
Review By [LFW] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Infinix
Review:
Definitely something to be continued. It would be nice to see Kendra done as something more than an unfortunate stepping stone to getting to Faith.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Feeds the plot bunny some high energy plot bunny food and gives the muse a jar of encouragement cookies::

I am looking forward to see where this story will go.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from kizunakat
Review:
definitely write more. I would like to see the rest of the gangs reaction if Xander started trying to take care of Kendra. jealous much? kizuna
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Bill
Review:
Very well done!
Comments from author:
Thanks glad you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [Bill] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Graycalls
Review:
I like this, please, continue. *Hides a large spork behind back*
Comments from author:
thanks i'm glad you enjoyed the story.

-Tjin
Review By [Graycalls] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from hpssslashfan
Review:
more
Comments from author:
I'll try.

-Tjin
Review By [hpssslashfan] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from martelcris
Review:
there some interesting possibility in this story. please keep writing!
Comments from author:
glad you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [martelcris] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Satori
Review:
With a little creativity Kendra as Sineya can have lots of interesting possibilities.

Do please try to stay away from the Xander sue which is the bane of most Halloween stories.

EDIT:
Liz Marcs is probably even more of an Avid Xander than anyone on this site, yet she easily manages to keep her Xander completely off the sue-meter. I'm a huge Xander fan myself, but Xander centric fic doesn't have to turn into Xander sue. Alas, it seems to the majority of the time.
Comments from author:
*Shrug* I'm an Avid Xander writer, it's what i do.

but this is my attempt at a Kendra focused fic (Xander will be a large part of it but if i continue it i will probably be focusing on Kendra.)
Review By [Satori] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from CullenBlack
Review:
more you bastard!
Review By [CullenBlack] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from Leeef
Review:
Interesting. I find it a bit hard to get into the Kendra character since I don't really remember her. But it seems like you have a good thing here.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [Leeef] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Helloween" from LadyFoxFire
Review:
write more. Buffy is such a whiney bitch. It's nice to see someone else.
Comments from author:
i have to agree, of all the slayers only Kennedy got on my nerves more.

i always thought Kendra's character was to underused.

hope you liked the Fic.

-Tjin
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [14 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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