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Wishes: Excerpts

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Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from spacey
Review:
i liked this chapter best of the three that comprise the series
Review By [spacey] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from stasa
Review:
Cute, very cute :)
Review By [stasa] • Date [6 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from Shezzi
Review:
Ohhh, fun! this was hilarious, please do more! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [4 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from mithrilandtj
Review:
:D

LOL *snort* You should more of these.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
*chortles with glee* I'm glad to see that this is going to be an ongoing series, because these two ficlets have been fun! Thank you!
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from thundever
Review:
Great chap, brilliant interactions between the characters and characterizations. I'm glad that Xander, Buffy and now Giles are taking it well as it would be unfair to blame Mini-Jack as he didn't know that the wish would be granted and what would happen. I'm glad that Jack seems to be settling in so well, please continue with these Excerpts.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I always like to know I'm writing the characters well.
Review By [thundever] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yeah, I can totally see "Grandpa" Giles and young Jack getting along swimmingly! Nice.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh My Gawd! LOL!

So... what, did X&B have Jack when they were 10?
Or did you de-age Jack?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from LFW
Review:
Great piece
Looking forward to finding out what the newest member of the family has from XB besides a sense of humor and general snark
Thanks
More please
Review By [LFW] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Children and Grandchildren" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
Until I went and read the reviews for the earlier story, I had assumed you'd de-aged Jack to better fit in as Buffy & Xander's biological child. But I saw you deny that in your responses, so perhaps when Giles first observes mini-Jack, you could also put in Giles's assessment of his new grandson's age.

I look forward to more; I'd like to see whether you have Jack continue to pretend to be a teenager, or will he be able to act more like his true age in this new situation.

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
I guess having him roll under the table or Halfrek acting 'motherly' made people assume Jack was a kid, because there was no mention in "Wishes" that he had been de-aged. But I went ahead and mentioned his age here anyway.

This could also be a little confusing for people seeing as how "Wishes" is marked 'completed'. It isn't complete, there's at least another chapter going to be written for it, that isn't up yet.
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [15 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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