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Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from bookworm
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This is yet another series that could stand some continuation, whether it be within the Spiderman universe (though this story itself is quite well contained) or sending Dawn somewhere completely different. I should probably go to bed, but I'll definitely be back to read more of your stories!
Review By [bookworm] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from firedrakegirl
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Aww!! THis is sweet!! I like the idea!! More of the series please!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from Markelo
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This is for the whole story. Why diyou make Dawn Peter's twin sister? That would have been KEWL!!!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from PrincessTai
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Thank you Dawn for being quicker than Mary-Jane!
Smart that you have her MJ's sister. Sure woulda been high drama if she'd been Harry's :-D
I like the explanation behind their childhood. It's nice that they weren't the BEST of friends or that you didn't replace MJ in his affections for her. Your way really makes sense. They mayn't have been close but there was always a connection. Like two kindred spirits calling out to each other. Very nice.
And the scene by the grave. The way you did that? Bravo. I especially like how you connected the line to the title. Makes all kind of sense with how you explained Dawn and Peter, and how Peter is known to be.

The minute parallels between Dawn and MJ, with Dawn and Buffy are great.
The threatening of the potential boyfriend. The jealousy but still wanting the beloved big sister to be happy.
And she carries a stake. I love that. You can't erase, everything huh? And I can't wait to see what happens when she remembers. Will she remember?
In a way I hope not. Especially if you give more scenes like that one with that allyway. But ya know, minus the goons. It was so them. His gentleness. Her nervousness. It was soft and quiet and sweet and shivery good. I felt simultaneously happy and bad for her.

I really hope there will be more to this.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from Jorrie
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Oh! Adorable! I love it. I cannot wait for more in the series. I'll be keeping a watchful eye. I hope you update soon, but no rush. ^_^
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
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Very cute. Nice to see some Summers traits, especially the stake, leaking through :)

Let's see, she could be Wonder Woman's sister, or the Joker's... How about a Discworld-cross with her as the sister of Susan Sto-Helit?
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from grasshopperknight
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this was really cute. i like peter a lot. next you should give her to logan or something. or batman! that wouldn't be sarcastic at all. no sir.
Review By [grasshopperknight] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from amusewithaview
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This series promises to be an exceedingly interesting one. I am so very much looking forward to more! This specific tale was adorable, Tobey Maguire is so very cute, and under-used!

Danke
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from mithrilandtj
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Aww, they're so Cute!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Spiders are outed..." from DigiEmissary
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I love it. Great voices for both characters, and I support almost any pairing with Peter as long as it isn't MJ. Looking forward to more!
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [16 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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