Having read your story the only critique I can think off is that it feels a bit to sugary for my taste. Dare I say trashy romance novel? ;-) But I can stand it and I am a sucker for any story where Xander gets his favorite blonde in the end. The way it should have been! So keep it up and bring on the sequel! Cause if Xander thinks getting the girl was hard, keeping her....
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.
I know what you mean about the story; it almost gave me Diabetes and I wrote it! ^_^
I don't know when, or even if, any sequel will rear it's head, as I found it very hard to write this one and keep it relatively light. I try to never say never, but I can't see it happening any time soon, as The Voices want me to work on my other WIP's first.
Vlad.
Review By [Muadzin] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from MistressRed
Review:
wow i loved it!!! i've never been much of a buffy/xander fan, but i think you've converted me!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.
Vlad.
Review By [MistressRed] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from nannabelle
Review:
Oh, I cried, I laughed...I mourned the ending. I hope you do a sequel as this is my absolute favorite non-cross pairing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.
I haven't decided on a sequel yet, mainly because it took so long to write this one! ^_^
Vlad.
Review By [nannabelle] • Date [18 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Pretty good.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback, it's appreciated.
Vlad.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [17 Nov 07] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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