Review of chapter "Send the Signal" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice to see that you got inspired to update this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some Lung fung soup (Dragon phoenix soup)::
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Send the Signal" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting, but too short. Please add more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prepare the Demons" from LordSia
Review:
I agree with the comment below; excellent fic, certainly a new (well, sort of) take on the "Golden Trio" concept. Brilliant. Pity you've abandoned it; can you at least put it up for adoption?
An interesting beginning, although I'd rather have seen 2 chapters with 3 parts each. (I just like longer chapters.) It'll be interesting to see where you go with this.
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [18 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Scrolls of A Pharaoh" from Sulien
Review:
o.o Okay, these are intriguing as all hell! I really hope you plan to keep adding to these, because I want to see where this is all going. *tries to remove hook set into jaw to no avail*
Review By [Sulien] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Scrolls of A Pharaoh" from Tanydwr
Review:
Coo-ool!
But how did the scrolls end up on Abydos? Or was Daniel always 'meant' to find them?
One point - Pharaoh, not Pharoh - you might want to correct your spelling of the chapter title.
Keep up the great work.
Lol, Tanydwr
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [21 Nov 07] • Not Rated