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Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from MeganPrice
Review:
Can we talk major CLIFFHANGER!!! Please tell there's more!!!!!!!
Review By [MeganPrice] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from (Past Donor)Aynot
Review:
A very Excellent Beginning; I can hardly wait to see more! SO, please write more soon. Also, I like your portrayal of Dawn.
Review By [(Past Donor)Aynot] • Date [13 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good beginning
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [13 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from Kirallie
Review:
Good start! So how powerful is Dawn? And what can she do? Glad she helped Nathaniel but how will Anita react? Hope there's more soon!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [14 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from Crydwyn
Review:
This looks like it could develop into an interesting story, I'll be looking forward to your next update :D
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [1 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from buffyandspike
Review:
Ahhh I can't wait until you add more! I really like it so far.
Review By [buffyandspike] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
Fascinating. I see a lot of potential with this one.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [22 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from WinterRayne
Review:
Great start!!!
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from Twoboots
Review:
Expand this. It has potential, but you are glossing too much. Take this and at least double it, possibly triple it with description and dialogue. I know you can do it!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from HunterH
Review:
Please write more soon Love to see where this is going :)
Review By [HunterH] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from WolfiousOne
Review:
I was beginning to think the blonde was Gregory... Confused me for a sec when it said it was Nate.
Still, good start for a story. :)
Review By [WolfiousOne] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from chajalive
Review:
Great beginning! As the first reviewer noted, Nathaniel is red haired. I was kind of confused, as I kept thinking you were talking about Jason, but then he would be a wolf... . Anyways, interesting beginning, and I like your Dawn characterisation.
Chaja
Review By [chajalive] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Quiet" from purrfus
Review:
Thanks for the timeline and verse notes.

Nathanial tends to be red-headed. Is your version blonde because - he is actually blonde and has dyed his hair in the past, but has now gone back to nature - or his interest in pain kicking in? Because the amount of bleach it would take to get all that hair from red to blonde would have to burn.

Interesting beginning. I've tracking to make sure I don't miss the next installment.
Comments from author:
Actually, I was just to lazy to look it up, and for some reason I convinced myself he was blonde. At some point in the near future, I'll go back and correct that, thanks for letting me know.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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