There will be more chapters... I'm just not to sure when. I'm working on another fic on fanfiction.net and it's my top priority... it's nearly done though (Unless I decide to write a sequel) . So we'll just have to see, I have a lot of plans for this fic, I even have most of the next chapter done... but it'll take time.
A good beginning and I do believe that I haven't seen this plot before and I've read lots of stories. So big kudos for original idea.
The story is quite good and I'd like to see more, but to tell you the truth it's nothing too fabulous. I mean, it seems to be grammatically correct and it's easy to read but it also seems kind of bland and I found myself wishing for something more. But I guess there is still time to add more action/drama/whatever you choose. The switch between Buffy and Harry was too easy. I think that you could do something with it. Like let them get each other's memories or skills or maybe even fashion sense. Also they are supposed to be the same person in different realities so shouldn't there be something similar to what happened when Dawn appeared. Some big mojo that modifies the memory of everyone else and only few people know that Buffy and Harry switched places.
Well, I guess I'll see where you decide to take us and I'll judge it later.
Comments from author:
The story takes place years before Dawn even existed, haha.
Review By [neris] • Date [20 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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