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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Vickzie
Review:
Loving the story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Letomo
Review:
An interesting take on the stories. I like the idea of her regenerating - though there are all sorts of things they can do within the first 15 hours of regeneration.

And, interesting idea of Willow having spoilers on the Doctor, and maybe the Key. I do hope you recatch the inspiration on this.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Oddshot
Review:
Just found this story and the 1st Chapter has got me .

Please SHEZZI update this and some of your other HANGING Stories
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from DarkestSlayer
Review:
awe damn you for ending it there and please please update soon
Review By [DarkestSlayer] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from apollo
Review:
Please continue this! This is amazing! I know this isn't exactly what you did, but after reading your story, I don't know why there haven't been more stories where Dawn was created via Chameleon Arch. Love the two of them traveling together, but where is the Doctor's TARDIS? Did they just leave it with the scoobies, abandoned, or something different?
Review By [apollo] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
VERY intriguing concept here, I'll give you that.

Still not ENTIRELY certain about the idea of Dawn/the Key being the Doctor's SISTER, but the explanation for her existence- caught in a dimensional anomaly and becoming 'merged' with her TARDIS- was definitely an original concept, and it's kind of interesting to see how the two of them interact.

Hope you keep this story up; I look forward to seeing what happens from here on in...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [22 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from imokit
Review:
Great story!
Review By [imokit] • Date [27 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from daveykins
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Glad to see this updated - it's an original story indeed.
Review By [daveykins] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Ddraig
Review:
I like this. Very original take on Dawn.

Thanks for sharing.
Review By [Ddraig] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Rhyssia
Review:
You are definately evil.

And I was bored today, so I'm rereading a lot of your stories.
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Terapsina
Review:
Do I love you or hate you?
Because I certainly don't know! You must update soon, and I almost don't care what other story's you're working at, this one gets the upper priority. What are you planning, this has a potential to become something huge... and I 'aint talking about the length.
Who are they up against?

One suggestion though, if you somewhere plan to put Buffy later don't choose Peaches as her eternal partner. And the word I used should show who you should choose.
Ooh, and maybe show a bit of Jack Harkness hitting on KK/Dawn, poor Doctor.
Although if you do slip Jack in here, maybe Faith would be the best option for him. Both cocky, and last time what got to Faith was the fact that Wood thought of himself more sexy. And most important both are Immortal, no breaking hearts after about fifty years.

Sorry I talk too much, and probably give you too much of my ideas, but you really don't have to listen, I just thought some of my ideas might give you other streaks of muse. And the next update would come sooner.
No really 'love' doesn't even begin to cover this.
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Yes you are!! More please. oh and good story. I like the interaction between Dawn and the Doctor.
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Keshkreature
Review:
lol, yes, you are very evil!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from PATM
Review:
Yes it was a long wait but worth it. Is Rose really required for the story, just spin KK off and
follow her adventures.
Comments from author:
I will be doing that, don't worry, just gonna use her to bring rose back for the Doctor first...hehehe thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [PATM] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from MarcusRowland
Review:
I know it's a bit late now, but one point you might want to consider - in Doctor Who continuity there is already a "Key to Time", an ancient Time Lord artifact that could destroy the universe. It was created then split into several parts and hidden through time and space - one of the parts was turned into a woman. Where did you think that the idea for Dawn originally came from?!

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Key_to_time#The_Key_to_Time

Given that this is incredibly important to all Time Lords it just seems a little unlikely that they would call a child "Key" - it would be tempting fate!
Comments from author:
Ummm....well, no, I didn't know...unfortunately my knowledge of classic Doctor Who is limited, although I am working on it! I wasn't allowed to watch it as a kid, so...yeah.

As far as being called the 'Key' I was under the impression that they chose their own names...so maybe she didn't know about that when she chose hers. Just a thought. Thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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