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Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::

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The fox knows many things, but
the hedgehog knows one big thing.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from LadyCarpathian
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When’s the next piece comin’ out???
Review By [LadyCarpathian] • Date [16 Sep 04] • Not Rated
Review of story "Cause and Effect" from Anonymous Reviewer
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This story is shaping up to be something truly awsome. I love what you have done with Xander. He still has all the qualities you love about him with a new kind of depth. I easgerly await the next chapter
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Cause and Effect" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Aw...I want to give Xander a hug. Poor puppy. And Damn Jean Grey! BEATINGS! I can't wait to see more from this universe...cause it's so neat! And Xander/Storm is cute! And Jubilee/Kitty...can't wait to see how that goes...poor girl.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [27 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Cause and Effect" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Good chapter.
Sweet and fun. Cafetaria scenes are always fun. The eating habits of bipeds.

Jubes blinded about the ideas around sex? Didn't no one teach the students about sex ed and the various relationship things like m/m, f/m, f/f, f/a, m/a, and a/a, (a standing for alien).

Very nice. Now how about some more action!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Cause and Effect" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Uh, the only comment I have for this chapter is that Stormy seems to be talking like the old Xander. The one who never left the Hellmouth. It's a nice story still, but I guess in most stories and things, she's always talking like royalty and my mind agrees that she is exotic in every way including her speech.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [25 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Cause and Effect" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I'm gonna go with that pink line is already in the process...like already conceived, not some future date going to conceive.

How can two blue dots be overlapping and still be distinguished as two?

This is the best written of the three in this series. Clearer and better defined line of events, easy to follow.

Does Xander ever consider the consequences of a person not existing? How these peoples' daily interaction with someone might be a turning point in history for someone else?

Remember the X-men TV show, how someone assassinated Charles Xavier in the past and the future turned out all crummy except for the Logan/Storm relationship and Magneto being the leader of mutants against the human constructed yuckies.

Wiping out these people so completely, wouldn't that just mean that other people would have come in their place?

Say that he changed something that changed some event that happened, would he know about the secondary changes besides the primary one he caused? Hmmm...from the second story in this series I would say yes...but it could just be a matter of him having seen that the strings tieing them together had vanished or changed...so maybe not on events that don't relate directly/immediately to him?

But can't you save someone who is already dead by winking out the entire existence of the person who killed the already dead person?

Have you explained his secondary powers? I mean most mutants really have one or two powers it seems unless they are like majorly Omega Class....wouldn't Xander be considered Omega class, with the powers that he fights with being alpha and maybe beta class?

Glad to see that though he may have a GF major, there is still a clinging onto the 'maybe' or 'what if' with Scott.

Very good series. Keep it up. What does he have to do with Sunnydale if anything at all?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Jul 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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