Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family" from Kiwikatipo
Review:
Nice ending and an original idea to write a story that way.
Quite a few typos in that last chapter unfortunately and when you have so few words they really all need to be perfect.
Comments from author:
Aw shot, sorry! I've always been bad at spelling and no spell check on photoshop. I'll see about correcting them.
Review By [Kiwikatipo] • Date [23 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Family" from cflat
Review:
Nice chapter! I liked Faith's line- "Slayer comma the equals moi". So, you're continuing this? That's good. It'll be interesting to see how you portray Dean and Faith's daughter, and also their relationship. I'm not normally a big Dean/Faith fan, but that paring seems to work out all right for here.
Comments from author:
The stories will mostly surround Haley, but of course some Dean and Faith in it too, hopefully you'll like them! Thanks for reviewing!
Nice moment! Keep wanting more words but sometimes a photo is worth a thousand words....
Review By [morgyair] • Date [20 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Get Her Out of Here!" from morgyair
Review:
Liked the faster feel in this photo...maybe a little more wording...hmmmm very good otherwise
Review By [morgyair] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Get Her Out of Here!" from RavenMorbisk
Review:
Excellent. Now update faster?
Review By [RavenMorbisk] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Get Her Out of Here!" from nannabelle
Review:
Well, I'm enjoying it.
Review By [nannabelle] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Get Her Out of Here!" from Aomizuoko
Review:
Hm, will you turn this into a fanfiction story, too? It would be interesting!
Comments from author:
I'm not turning this into a fanfiction story, but I'm writing ficlets for them in the future. This is my prequel to them so I wanted to get this one done! I have one ficlet already written and then another one in the process of writing which mixes this story idea (Faith, Dean, and Haley) with my other story Never Normal (Buffy, Harry, and Lilia). Thanks for the review!
Review By [Aomizuoko] • Date [16 Dec 07] • Not Rated
hot, col, loud, sharp and blunt, I think (I haven't checked it, but I'm fairly sure that's the five methods).
I like your story/fanart idea, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. It's a nice idea, building your story up as a series of moments/pictures.
Kiwikatipo
morgyair
