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Review of chapter "Chapter21 What I Learned From Watching Coyote Ugly" from Kalliza
Review:
Really love this story, and I'm hoping for an update soon. Great work!
Review By [Kalliza] • Date [12 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 Better Not Poke The Bear!" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job you've done, I'm hoping to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I've actually got another one up! AND IT DIDN'T TAKE A YEAR TO DO IT!!! :)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 Better Not Poke The Bear!" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Whoof! Nice characterization! Cannot wait to see what the brothers do when they return to SunnyD!
Comments from author:
I got at least a couple more fics of them in the summer...so...............
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [7 Sep 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 Better Not Poke The Bear!" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
I like how, Sam, even though he was just as angry with Xander, decided to take the middle ground. It's also nice to see Xander have a little of his father in him. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks...I didn't have the heart to make them yell at him :) That and I wanted to give Sam a taste of how it is for Dean when he and his dad are fighting, and Dean has to try to get in the middle.
Yeah..cause there are some things you inherit from a parent, even if you haven't met them....one of my nieces wasn't around her mom when she was little, but she still sounded like her, and had some of the same personality traits as her (good and bad).
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [31 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 Better Not Poke The Bear!" from Elleria
Review:
Love this!
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 20 Better Not Poke The Bear!" from aeraveil
Review:
Good story, excellent characterization. Only one minor quibble though, the formatting is very odd with the spaces and sentence wrapping. Is it something with how the story is loading up?
Comments from author:
Sorry about that. :( I hope I fixed it! There are two things I blame for the problem. The first is that I don't have word perfect, or anything I used to have...now it's notepad, so it scrunches things up, so I space it different than I have it written in my notebook...so when I copy and paste it, it goes on there a little wonky.

The second is that I'm the end of my reading cycle (where I read, read, read, until my brain won't let me 'see' the words anymore, and I can't get into a book...which is frustrating when I have to stop in the middle of a GOOD book). I'm at the point where my brain will FINALLY let me read, but only short stuff, like fan-fiction. And lately the stories I've read have given me what I call post traumatic run-on paragraph syndrome. Which means that the authors had paragraphs that desperately need separated. The example are (but not limited to), combining paragraphs in two different voices (be it actual speaking parts, or thoughts and points of views), and the story being almost in one giant paragraph.

I've now noticed the problem is on more than one chapter!!! I don't remember it having as many spaces on it when I posted them!!! So I guess the main problem is the first problem I mentioned...again sorry about that! I'm planning on going chapter by chapter, hopefully fixing them.

Again, when it's written in my notebook, there isn't a problem. But when I'm typing, I get flashes on how hard to read those stories were, and I got a little 'Enter' button happy. :( I didn't really notice on either problem when I copied and pasted because I was mainly worried about spelling, and stuff.
Review By [aeraveil] • Date [22 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19. Busted!" from DebraN
Review:
Poor Xander, offering up his beer and chicken wings in hope of brownie points. I don't think Dean is going to be so easily passified. At least they were able to get some information on the case. I'm looking forward to seeing how the brothers hash this out.
Comments from author:
Nope, he isn't...but Xander HAD to try, didn't he? lol
Review By [DebraN] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19. Busted!" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Thanks :)
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19. Busted!" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. It's great how, although Xander didn't 'stay 'as he was told to, it's because he didn't that they were able to get such answers from Craig. I do not envy Xander now though and wonder what Dean will do. Looking forward to reading what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you :)
At first, I was gonna have the waitress give the info to Dean...but then I figured it would be better for Xander to get it from someone...that way it would help in Xander's defense.
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from DebraN
Review:
I was pleasantly surprized to see a new chapter to this story. Dean really should have realized Xander would dig into the case on his own. I can't wait to see how the boys react when they find out what the youngest Winchester has been up to. I'm also looking forward to Dean finally suggesting to Sam that they stay in Sunnydale (and near Xander) once school starts up again. I hope to see more of this story soon.

Debra
Comments from author:
well, I'm thinking since they were raised to obey comands, Dean thought it would work. The next chapter (that I'm gonna post after replying to your review) the older Winchesters will catch him. Which is why the title is called 'Busted'. But you won't get the full reaction til' next chapter.....:(

I don't know how it'll go. i still don't know how much to change in both worlds. Especailly since Putting the Winchesters in Sunnydale will DRASTICALLY change BTVS.
For instance, Can you imagine Dean letting Angel live after he turns into Angelus?

At least I have PLENTY of timne before I get to thier summers end.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
It was great to see another chapter of this story. I liked Xander's interaction with the locals. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how things work out with this current hunt, as well as more brother interaction.
Comments from author:
Thanks....I'm just sorry that there's such long gaps in updates. :(
RL sometimes gets in the way..............then there's that darn fanvid addiction I have.....then BAM! I realized a year went by, and I haven't written anything!
Anyway...........as thanks for your (and nice readers such as yourself) patience, I made sure you wouldn't have too long a wait for another update. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from Kirallie
Review:
Happy to see an update!!
Comments from author:
You'll be even happier, 'cause I'm about to update AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! *gasp in shock* 'WOW! You mean I DON'T have to wait ANOTHER year!!!!!'
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
O wow! Hi! It's been forever! But so happy you updated. Xander you fail. Epic fail. Lol
Comments from author:
I KNOW!!!!! I CAN'T believe it's been a YEAR AND A HALF since I had updated!!!! its SOO UNFAIR how when you WANTED months to go by fast when your a kid, it took SOO LONG!!!! And now that Iwant it to slow down so I can get everything done, it goes SOO FAST!!!!!!

Yep...I can't even believe it....and I wrote it lol
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from Elleria
Review:
Yay! An update! More soon please? Love this.
Comments from author:
I'm HOPING to get another one up soon :)
I was forced into waiting at the doctors office for HOURS, so I had plenty of time to write! I think it's almost done.............so far eight pages (counting front and back as one since it's a medium sized notepad I'm using since I've misplaced my spiral after typing the last chapter).
So Muse, please don't fail me now (AGAIN!)!!!!!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from SariLane
Review:
I hope you haven't forgotten this.
Comments from author:
Nope...I'm posting the next chapter now! :)
Review By [SariLane] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
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