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Review of chapter "Chapter 19. Busted!" from DebraN
Review:
Poor Xander, offering up his beer and chicken wings in hope of brownie points. I don't think Dean is going to be so easily passified. At least they were able to get some information on the case. I'm looking forward to seeing how the brothers hash this out.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19. Busted!" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [2 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19. Busted!" from (Recent Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. It's great how, although Xander didn't 'stay 'as he was told to, it's because he didn't that they were able to get such answers from Craig. I do not envy Xander now though and wonder what Dean will do. Looking forward to reading what happens next.
Review By [(Recent Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [1 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from DebraN
Review:
I was pleasantly surprized to see a new chapter to this story. Dean really should have realized Xander would dig into the case on his own. I can't wait to see how the boys react when they find out what the youngest Winchester has been up to. I'm also looking forward to Dean finally suggesting to Sam that they stay in Sunnydale (and near Xander) once school starts up again. I hope to see more of this story soon.

Debra
Comments from author:
well, I'm thinking since they were raised to obey comands, Dean thought it would work. The next chapter (that I'm gonna post after replying to your review) the older Winchesters will catch him. Which is why the title is called 'Busted'. But you won't get the full reaction til' next chapter.....:(

I don't know how it'll go. i still don't know how much to change in both worlds. Especailly since Putting the Winchesters in Sunnydale will DRASTICALLY change BTVS.
For instance, Can you imagine Dean letting Angel live after he turns into Angelus?

At least I have PLENTY of timne before I get to thier summers end.
Review By [DebraN] • Date [30 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from (Recent Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
It was great to see another chapter of this story. I liked Xander's interaction with the locals. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how things work out with this current hunt, as well as more brother interaction.
Comments from author:
Thanks....I'm just sorry that there's such long gaps in updates. :(
RL sometimes gets in the way..............then there's that darn fanvid addiction I have.....then BAM! I realized a year went by, and I haven't written anything!
Anyway...........as thanks for your (and nice readers such as yourself) patience, I made sure you wouldn't have too long a wait for another update. :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [27 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from Kirallie
Review:
Happy to see an update!!
Comments from author:
You'll be even happier, 'cause I'm about to update AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! *gasp in shock* 'WOW! You mean I DON'T have to wait ANOTHER year!!!!!'
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [26 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
O wow! Hi! It's been forever! But so happy you updated. Xander you fail. Epic fail. Lol
Comments from author:
I KNOW!!!!! I CAN'T believe it's been a YEAR AND A HALF since I had updated!!!! its SOO UNFAIR how when you WANTED months to go by fast when your a kid, it took SOO LONG!!!! And now that Iwant it to slow down so I can get everything done, it goes SOO FAST!!!!!!

Yep...I can't even believe it....and I wrote it lol
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18. The Triple Shooter" from Elleria
Review:
Yay! An update! More soon please? Love this.
Comments from author:
I'm HOPING to get another one up soon :)
I was forced into waiting at the doctors office for HOURS, so I had plenty of time to write! I think it's almost done.............so far eight pages (counting front and back as one since it's a medium sized notepad I'm using since I've misplaced my spiral after typing the last chapter).
So Muse, please don't fail me now (AGAIN!)!!!!!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from SariLane
Review:
I hope you haven't forgotten this.
Comments from author:
Nope...I'm posting the next chapter now! :)
Review By [SariLane] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from misdom
Review:
This is awesome. I'm normally not a fan of real family stories but this is awesome. I hope you don't abandon it.
Comments from author:
Thank you soo much! :)
I didn't abandon.... though as long as it took, I don't blame you for thinking it.
Hope the next chapter that I'm about to post now will be worth the wait!!
Review By [misdom] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from Gwirry
Review:
Oh my God, this is AMAZING! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thanks soo much!!! *hugs*
I'm posting the next chapter now. Sorry for the wait!!!!
Review By [Gwirry] • Date [17 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from MagnusXXN
Review:
Dude, you gotta update. Its pretty good, and I can't wait to read more. See what happens next. Any idea on taking Xander to the Roadhouse? I'm all for Xander/Jo pairings.



): )
Comments from author:
Yay! I FINALLY got the next chapter done!!!!
I can't bring xander to the Roadhouse until after John's dead if I want to stay as cannon as possible. I'm not for sure how much I'll change things in the two real series :(
Though a Jo/Xander pairing DOES sound interesting..........................it's soo long to tell. ESPECIALLY since my muse keeps running away! I had to break into the Muse Protection Program's computer to track her down this time. I guess the MPP found out about all those times I threatened to chain my Muse down, so she wouldn't run off! :(
Review By [MagnusXXN] • Date [12 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Comments from author:
Thanks for being soo patient! :)
Here's your reward! i got a new chapter!!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from (Recent Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
Good update. I look forward to more Winchester interaction with Xander as well.
Review By [(Recent Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 17" from mountainelements
Review:
Yay, an update! It's sad that there was no Xander though. I think he went to the library.
Comments from author:
You'll find out next chapter where he went. I just hope it won't take as long as this one had!!!
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [25 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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