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Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from LisaGorman
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Please update! It's been so long.
Review By [LisaGorman] • Date [19 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from BrownFinderth
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Okay, it's been almost two years since Karie wrote the last chapter to this very interesting story, yet, I am eager to see if the author can come back and continue to write!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [19 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from orangemike
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You have a life. We understand. Wouldn't mind a new chapter, though.
Review By [orangemike] • Date [24 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from SpacedCadet
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A year since the last update!

More please.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from serenityselena
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fabulous story ....
hope Amy gets what she deserves and that the gang will be ok...
hope to read more soon ^__^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [18 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from collectivetears
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was wondering if you were going to update this story anymore or if you were going to leave it hanging i think it is very good so far i do hope you continue writing this story i would like to see how it ends
Review By [collectivetears] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from lucyferr
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ooh this is looking promising!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from lucyferr
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"I really do want to spend time with you, Willow... I wanted to threaten the boyfriends and chaperone dances, groan over a cell phone bill or buy you a car at graduation."
Willow's eyes were filling with tears as his words washed over her, his serious face blurring slightly. "I wanted that too," she whispered, not trusting her voice to speak louder. "I didn't know about you, but I wanted that. ... It hurt when I was little, when I tried so hard to get his attention and he pushed me away. Mom wasn't much better. Babysitters were better than nothing, and they took over until I was twelve and then I was old enough to be by myself."
"God, I wish I'd known," Grissom said, looking stricken.

That actually caused me to shed a coupla tears
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from lucyferr
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Good father - daughter bonding...
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from lucyferr
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Thinking about GG being all worried-like about Giles - typical reaction from newly found father figures in these Real Family fics - some fic should have the Scoobies explanation be that they are like a wolf pack, with Buffy the (unlikely looking) alpha and Giles the old wolf advisor.
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from evilredknight
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Interesting story.
I am getting a little tired of having Dawn call Buffy selfish.
Is that your opinion of Buffy?
Or just how you think Dawn sees her sister?
Seems a little bit of little sister syndrome combined with teenage judgementalism, is creeping in.
Buffy is in no way perfect, but they all have some serious character flaws. And yet Dawn zeroes in on her sister.
You'd think she'd be a little less so, considering, you know Buffy died for her and everything.
Review By [evilredknight] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from bucksavage
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Thought I'd review now after reading every chapter up to this point; it is really pretty good so far, I can sense a few interesting dynamics here and there: the way Xander seems to creep out Nick, how Sara seems so calm around the Scoobies, Greg's humourous way of finding out Willow is a lesbian (that was priceless by the way), and then there's Amy. I like the choice of here as the big bad, she certainly went down a similar path as Willow with the black magic, though I don't think that even Amy can compare to what happens if Willow turns into Darth Willow again.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

EDIT: I can't believe I forgot to add this in my review the first time, but I am sorry to hear about your father.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from AXanFan
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I only occasionally read stories that are not Xander-centered. This one seems to be pretty cool. I like the original CSI so I know and enjoy the characters from both series.

Some of the characters are still a bit vague so I can't say for sure they are "in Character", but so far none are way "out of character". Interesting idea to bring Amy into this.

The whole electronics problem that Willow has is a bit weird -- I believe that between Willow's brains and her superior magic she could easily come up with a way to shield at least her own laptop and phone even if she couldn't protect random electronics.

Even though this is a Willow story, I would love to see a little more of Xander. Would also love to see some additional interaction between individuals from the two groups.

Can't wait to see where you take this -- hope you write more soon.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [6 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from dreameralways
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Yay. Update. I still vote no noncanon slash. And I can totally see Amy outing Willow in front of her dad. "Don't forget about the blood on your hands, little witch." That could be really interesting to explain, "Yeah, I killed a guy in a fit of temporary insanity and tried to kill everyone on earth, but I'm better now." Though I imagine they would just leave Grissom to his confusion during the show down.
Sorry life was so crazy, but I know how that goes. Glad you're back.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [5 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from PATM
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Amy is a bit of a grind about Willow's past isn't she? I've had to reread the whole story,no
problem there much enjoyment had, to get the flow. I hope Willow gets over the anti tech virus she's got attached to, it detracts from the Willowness and ups the victim feeling. Thats not
Willow is it?
Review By [PATM] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Not Rated
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