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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwilightHeretic
Review:
Hehe, Xander's a ginger.
The Doctor must be so jealous.
Review By [TwilightHeretic] • Date [16 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Sequel please?
Review By [Elleria] • Date [10 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
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hrmmm... interesting story...

Now, I'm thinking, doesn't the Doctor have a Tardis that he can travel through time to go back and warn Xander to stay away from the Master? I mean, I know he refrains in tampering with the true timeline and all, but I wonder what rules would he break for another TimeLord?

*feeds a few carrots to the plotbunnies*
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from anpu
Review:
Interesting story. DOCTOR WHO belongs to the BBC AND SIDNEY NEWMAN.
Review By [anpu] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LadyYueh
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Interesting idea.

Though, wouldn't Buffy or someone else with enhanced senses have been able to hear his second heart?
Was The Doctor using an accent as 'Uncle Rory'? And wasn't he the one that sold Xander the lemon? [Sorry! I meant the lemon as in the clunker...the car that broke down after Graduation and got him stuck in Oxnard.]
Why would the Doctor leave Xan in what we've been led to believe is a somewhat abusive household and in a demon-infested town. Considering he's the remnant of his people. [Edit: Didn't finish the thought. If Xan was the last of his people you'd think he'd want to keep him all safe and close, not fighting demons! Not implying there's any familial relationship but I doubt the Doctor would leave him with "stupid apes" when he can just whisk Xander away in his TARDIS. Why the checking up as Rory? Hellmouth provides some protection maybe?]

*wishes for snarkier, babbly!Xander*
Comments from author:
I didn't even think about the Buffy thing.... thanks for bringing it up... And I'm not quite sure what you mean by giving xander the lemon.... And who said Xander was the Doctor's? He's still got Susan out there too....
Review By [LadyYueh] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
:)
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rothos
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Wow, Xan is a Timelord. Explains a few things, like being a Demon magnet (also explained by the white knight complex) being able to face down the zombies and Angelus with no more than a smile and surviving Sunnydale. Good story, really good even though it is short.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it... I like having Xan be special... and with all the suggestuions, questions, and comments I've recived... I may have to contiue this... so add yours please...
Review By [rothos] • Date [26 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from angelkitty
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wow that was so good
Review By [angelkitty] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dragonelf
Review:
I wish that this story isn't a one-shot.

:: Feeds the plot bunny in hope of getting a sequel ::
Comments from author:
:passes food to plot bunny: It helps, any questions or ideas you have would help even more....
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
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Xander a Time Lord? Neat! WIsh it wasn't a one shot!
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you liked it Kirallie. It looks like I'm getting a lot of idea from questions, so it might just continue.... Leave any comment you have for ideas, please. You have great plot twists in your stories...
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from micedden
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love it more soon
Review By [micedden] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from izzygirl
Review:
I liked this. will there be more soon?
Comments from author:
glad you liked it. The story is only ment as a one shot but hey, if my brain feels inspired i may write some ficlets of his adventures....
Review By [izzygirl] • Date [25 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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