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Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Vorchan
Review:
Painful, Dave, but spectacularly written story! The real painful part is where Kennedy's son is dying... I would hope he winds up in Heaven., but you Do have accurate a Demon's POV on the whole matter.
Signed:
Vorchan, a fan of fanfiction.
Comments from author:
My cringing at my early work? Well I've been doing it all my life. But there's something about some of the stories, or indeed parts of these stories that figuratively put my teeth on edge!

Like the curates egg, there good in parts.

Anyway its nice to hear from someone who enjoys them still,

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve." from Vorchan
Review:
Well written, Dave, and yes, I am currently reading your "Seattle Slayers series", it's arguably one of my favorites, I delight in reading it!
The death of Kennedy's son really brought tears to my eyes, and the fact that the demons changed who's who's baby IS exactly what such beings Would do!
I Really enjoyed the fact that Little Tara so wished her baby brother would live and play with her that she was willing to do Anything to get him back!
I honestly don't know why you seem to cringe at the thought of this story series, this is Great Work!
I really felt like crying when I learned of Kennedy's son passing into the Next world... and would have wanted to hold her during her grieving, as well as her friends- even though I strongly detest her lifestyle choices.
This is simply Spectacular!
Signed:
Vorchan, a fan of fanfiction.
Comments from author:
See comment above.

D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [25 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Vorchan
Review:
I would feel like crying if the baby dies myself... so I Somewhat understand Kennedy's upset emotional state- she loves her son, so of course she'd be upset about his passing., so young, so innocent, so pure- Man, that just hurts!
Great work, Dave!
Signed:
Vorchan.
Comments from author:
Ah-ha! You're reading through some of my old Seattle Slayers stories.

There's a few of these that make me cringe nowadays. At the time I thought they were pretty good now I think some are pretty lame but others could be rescued with a re-write...we live and learn! I particularly enjoyed writing the head Demon in this one as I remembered it.

I think my main problem back then was trying to put in too many story threads in one story without too much thought as to how I'd resolve them.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Vorchan
Review:
Well, the reason for the lesser rating is the relationship that Kennedy is in... but it's probably, no, scratch that, Definitely undeserved- YOU DID FINE!- this story deserves a 10, so instead of an 8, which I picked, I'll give it a 10!
The Mom/Daughter fight is predictable- completely!- regarding Kennedy's lifestyle... but I am delighted that they're protecting and raising children!
Regarding Tara's confusion; Completely understandable! THAT'S why those relationships are Problematic for Children!
GREAT WORK!!!!!
Signed:
Vorchan.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I really only remember the basic outline for this story so I'll take your word for it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vorchan
Review:
The only thing I found disreputable is the part where Kennedy and Willow seem to be sitting on eachother.
A high-level demon utilizing abortion to get power is just plain Exactly what such a Villain would do! Excellent Touch!
This is an Extremely good story, all in all.
You did a Great Job, Dave!- true villainy on the part of the Demon Lord- trying to murder unborn Babies is Exactly what such a creature would do, too!
Well Done!
I love the premise for the title: Deliver Me (probaby meaning in multiple ways.)
Spectacular Story!
In case you haven't discerned it by now; I delight in this story.
Signed:
Vorchan.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, such praise is always nice to hear.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Lots of changes with this one. First Kennedy's son dies, then all the sudden she has a daughter, never saw that one coming. LOL a little Robin bashing there. The fight at Cleveland was pretty good, lots of action.
Thanks for posting this great series.
Comments from author:
Lots of ideas here, some I think worked others not so much. Anyway glad you enjoyed.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice climactic battle, poor people who didn't quite make it.

Any chance of you doing an entry in the "Tales from the Compelled 'Verse"? I'd love to see what you could do with Hotpoint's gaggle of Gunslayers :D
Comments from author:
As always thank-you for your review.

Can't say i've looked at the 'Compelled Verse' . I shall take a look today and see what's what.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [18 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Mcspender
Review:
Cool ending dude =)!.
I'm kinda expecting what new histories you will be writing about, and what new plans Hassler...Hasselof... the demon boss is gonna scheme.
Ya know, I really wanted to see a crossover between the Sopranos and The Slayers, specially a Kennedy reunion with Uncle Tony.

Congratulations for your series dude, it's been really cool.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I have loads of stuff planned, a lot of it involving Kennedy, now we'll just have to see what gets written!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from TaraLi
Review:
Not bad at all, though I have to wonder about the plans within the plans that leave some hope for the prophecy to be broken. D'Hoffryn is obviously up to his own game, though I fear Hassellhoff will find it all to easy to implement some of his ideas.

I love the homage to Millennium, too - that was an awesome movie!
Comments from author:
I'm sure you mean Hasseldorf! Or are suggesting that an American actor/singer is the Devil incarnate!

Thank-you for your review, as I note there will have to be the one off Summer Special to round it all out.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from MarcusRowland
Review:
I suspect that D'Hoffryn is planning a nasty surprise for Hasseldorf somewhere along the line. He's not going to be content to play second fiddle forever.
Comments from author:
Idea's for D'Hoffryn centred stories are already at the back of my mind. He's a Demon you can actually write about in an intelligent and interesting way. He's not all 'kill and smash' like so many demons.

Are Demons all bad?

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from grd
Review:
Awesome story. Please oh please don't make this Christmas day so sad.
Comments from author:
You'll have to wait until Friday to find out.

All the Best,
DaveT.
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from JoeDineen
Review:
Tragedy and surreal all in one package, on the one hand Andrew makes a light saber and the death of the infant on the other. Don't know whether to laugh of cry.
Comments from author:
Lifes like that, things are not always one way or another in the end I hope it'll end...?

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Mcspender
Review:
Ouch =(.
I'm heart-broken dude =(.
Cool trio of chapters man, you really wanna end the series with a Bang, ain't ya=)?.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
That's the idea. Last chapters on Friday (I hope).

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
Bieenvenido al mundo pequeño cazador, te va a gustar mucho este lugar!! ;)... and now in english: Weelcome to the world little slayer, you'll like this place a lot =D!.

Seems like the kid might be a good goalie... or a swimmer in the future, hehehehe =).

The monkeys and House, who's the messiest fiend of them all? It's House to me, hands down.

Cool chapters dude.

See ya!!!
Comments from author:
As always your reviews keep me going!

Thanks.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Dragonelf
Review:
:: Keeps fingers crossed and feeds the mutant/meta/clone plot bunnies and at same time giggles insanely ::

I am looking forward to read the myriad of chapters you might get inspired to write.
Comments from author:
Thank-you nice of you to say so.

The Chapters are written I just have to drip feed them to you MAW-HA-HA! Maybe an update tomorrow(if I have a connection) otherwise Monday.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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