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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten." from Vorchan
Review:
I would feel like crying if the baby dies myself... so I Somewhat understand Kennedy's upset emotional state- she loves her son, so of course she'd be upset about his passing., so young, so innocent, so pure- Man, that just hurts!
Great work, Dave!
Signed:
Vorchan.
Comments from author:
Ah-ha! You're reading through some of my old Seattle Slayers stories.

There's a few of these that make me cringe nowadays. At the time I thought they were pretty good now I think some are pretty lame but others could be rescued with a re-write...we live and learn! I particularly enjoyed writing the head Demon in this one as I remembered it.

I think my main problem back then was trying to put in too many story threads in one story without too much thought as to how I'd resolve them.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [26 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two." from Vorchan
Review:
Well, the reason for the lesser rating is the relationship that Kennedy is in... but it's probably, no, scratch that, Definitely undeserved- YOU DID FINE!- this story deserves a 10, so instead of an 8, which I picked, I'll give it a 10!
The Mom/Daughter fight is predictable- completely!- regarding Kennedy's lifestyle... but I am delighted that they're protecting and raising children!
Regarding Tara's confusion; Completely understandable! THAT'S why those relationships are Problematic for Children!
GREAT WORK!!!!!
Signed:
Vorchan.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I really only remember the basic outline for this story so I'll take your word for it.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Vorchan
Review:
The only thing I found disreputable is the part where Kennedy and Willow seem to be sitting on eachother.
A high-level demon utilizing abortion to get power is just plain Exactly what such a Villain would do! Excellent Touch!
This is an Extremely good story, all in all.
You did a Great Job, Dave!- true villainy on the part of the Demon Lord- trying to murder unborn Babies is Exactly what such a creature would do, too!
Well Done!
I love the premise for the title: Deliver Me (probaby meaning in multiple ways.)
Spectacular Story!
In case you haven't discerned it by now; I delight in this story.
Signed:
Vorchan.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, such praise is always nice to hear.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Vorchan] • Date [3 Jun 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from maxthehobbit
Review:
Lots of changes with this one. First Kennedy's son dies, then all the sudden she has a daughter, never saw that one coming. LOL a little Robin bashing there. The fight at Cleveland was pretty good, lots of action.
Thanks for posting this great series.
Comments from author:
Lots of ideas here, some I think worked others not so much. Anyway glad you enjoyed.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice climactic battle, poor people who didn't quite make it.

Any chance of you doing an entry in the "Tales from the Compelled 'Verse"? I'd love to see what you could do with Hotpoint's gaggle of Gunslayers :D
Comments from author:
As always thank-you for your review.

Can't say i've looked at the 'Compelled Verse' . I shall take a look today and see what's what.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [18 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from Mcspender
Review:
Cool ending dude =)!.
I'm kinda expecting what new histories you will be writing about, and what new plans Hassler...Hasselof... the demon boss is gonna scheme.
Ya know, I really wanted to see a crossover between the Sopranos and The Slayers, specially a Kennedy reunion with Uncle Tony.

Congratulations for your series dude, it's been really cool.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I have loads of stuff planned, a lot of it involving Kennedy, now we'll just have to see what gets written!

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from TaraLi
Review:
Not bad at all, though I have to wonder about the plans within the plans that leave some hope for the prophecy to be broken. D'Hoffryn is obviously up to his own game, though I fear Hassellhoff will find it all to easy to implement some of his ideas.

I love the homage to Millennium, too - that was an awesome movie!
Comments from author:
I'm sure you mean Hasseldorf! Or are suggesting that an American actor/singer is the Devil incarnate!

Thank-you for your review, as I note there will have to be the one off Summer Special to round it all out.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [TaraLi] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen." from MarcusRowland
Review:
I suspect that D'Hoffryn is planning a nasty surprise for Hasseldorf somewhere along the line. He's not going to be content to play second fiddle forever.
Comments from author:
Idea's for D'Hoffryn centred stories are already at the back of my mind. He's a Demon you can actually write about in an intelligent and interesting way. He's not all 'kill and smash' like so many demons.

Are Demons all bad?

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from grd
Review:
Awesome story. Please oh please don't make this Christmas day so sad.
Comments from author:
You'll have to wait until Friday to find out.

All the Best,
DaveT.
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from JoeDineen
Review:
Tragedy and surreal all in one package, on the one hand Andrew makes a light saber and the death of the infant on the other. Don't know whether to laugh of cry.
Comments from author:
Lifes like that, things are not always one way or another in the end I hope it'll end...?

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven." from Mcspender
Review:
Ouch =(.
I'm heart-broken dude =(.
Cool trio of chapters man, you really wanna end the series with a Bang, ain't ya=)?.

See ya!!
Comments from author:
That's the idea. Last chapters on Friday (I hope).

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight." from Mcspender
Review:
Bieenvenido al mundo pequeño cazador, te va a gustar mucho este lugar!! ;)... and now in english: Weelcome to the world little slayer, you'll like this place a lot =D!.

Seems like the kid might be a good goalie... or a swimmer in the future, hehehehe =).

The monkeys and House, who's the messiest fiend of them all? It's House to me, hands down.

Cool chapters dude.

See ya!!!
Comments from author:
As always your reviews keep me going!

Thanks.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Dragonelf
Review:
:: Keeps fingers crossed and feeds the mutant/meta/clone plot bunnies and at same time giggles insanely ::

I am looking forward to read the myriad of chapters you might get inspired to write.
Comments from author:
Thank-you nice of you to say so.

The Chapters are written I just have to drip feed them to you MAW-HA-HA! Maybe an update tomorrow(if I have a connection) otherwise Monday.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Mcspender
Review:
The Slayermovile???? Dude, And Buffy dares to say that Andrew reads too many comic books, by the way, the Cap America comic... is this some kind of clue about the power level of Kenny kid???.

Kenny gramps, and the true name of her mom... Dude, this is gonna rock!.

The lord of the rings and the 3 rings circus jokes?? Hehehehe, niiice.
And as usual, Jack in his usual way, handles the job.

Yep, a big light and a school bus appearing from thin air, nothing unusual for an SG1 vet.

Got any special plans for Buffy and Hermes? I mean, at least this is an improvement from her former boyfriends, the guy is a god =P.

And of course, Greg House, making an mess out of things, does he has some kind of magic sensitivity, or his inquiring mind made him possible to see Willow??.

Cool chapters!!

See ya!!
Comments from author:
I hope so!

Greg House often sees things other people don't so I thought why not...

Capt America? I have to confess was just the first American comic I thought of...no real hidden meaning there.

Hermes is also very fast...know what I mean? So, I don't think it'll last.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Moderator)jrabbit
Review:
Here they come,
Flying down the street.
They've got the sharpest claw for,
anyone they meet...
Comments from author:
Now that made me laugh! I really really wish I'd thought of that!

DaveT.
Review By [(Moderator)jrabbit] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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