Someday, but I have tried for over a year to make myself write this and nothing feels right so I decided to just put it on hold for now. Maybe after I get my mind off of it I will finally be able to continue.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is a wonderful story despite the many many spelling errors in it. I love that Buffy is making friends with Nevil the poor guy needs more friends. Foolish Willow getting over eager to do something when it could easily cause problems. I have to say that I love Doyle's vision it was rather cool. I am looking forward to the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
wow this is awesome. what a twist. It makes sense that that would be something that would cause him a moment of true happiness. Poor Buffy once again being alive has caused someone she loves to basically die. only this time he has changed to the stuff of nightmares.
I am a little confused though, is Buffy Snape's daughter or is she really his niece?
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
I'm so happy you updated, it's been a while, lol. Anyway this still looks really interesting and I can't wait for more! I've always been a sucker for Buffy/Draco romance!
I love this story so much and that was a great twist the cousin being there. I am glad that it appears Buffy will have somebody from her family being with her...helping her. I hope you update soon. Great story!!! Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.
Smile, Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Your note indicated you aren't working with a Beta. You might want to try reading the chapters out loud. Some of the words are what they need to be be.
For example - when the boys are peeking into the library - in the story they are pecking.
Good Luck
Comments from author:
Thank you for that suggestion. It is something that I will impliment from now on.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
I like this... but I'm kind of confused so I hope you continue... I guess that was Harry who walked into the library cause i don't see the twins talking to Draco
Comments from author:
You are right, it is not Draco, it is not Harry either. I have only seen this person used in one other story.
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Wow!!! That was a great story so far, but I can't figure out for the life of me who the boy is...I guess I will have to wait to find out. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.
Smile, Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I am glad that you are enjoying it so far. I thank everyone will be surprised when the boy id. is reveled.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great start to a story! I do have a question, is Snape Buffy's real biological father or is he just saying he is her father now since her parents are dead? I'm not sure I understood all that. Anyhow, I can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
What happen and how Buffy came to this point will be explained in the chapter after the next!
Review By [Fritolays] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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