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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from bradsan
Review:
alright let me get this straight. Hank is Buffy's real dad and Snape's brother. Snape and Buffy's mum had a child who died. Hank sold his own daughter to the Council and Snape act's like Buffy's father as a debt he repays his brother for hiding Buffy's mum. Or Louise/Joyce remarried to Hank who isn't Snape's brother and know nothing about the wizard world, The wizard who helped Buffy and Gilse is Snape's brother. Which one is the right version because I think I misunderstand some thing.

Oh how come Snape is saying former Slayer, she still is the Slayer. So former doesn't make sense and the Council wants to use Buffy to make more Slayers. Her wand and actions already showed that she is still a Slayer. Didn't he wanted Dumbledore to know that Buffy is still the Slayer.

I wish you would continue this story because I would like to read more. I also love to see Snape loosen up with Buffy around. Will Angelus be re souled before he finds Buffy and will The PTB help the one who will preform the curse. Will the Council be taken care of by the PTB or show how to take down the Council. The PTB is already protecting Buffy one way or another. How did Snape react after the more detailed story Buffy revealed.

I really wish you would continue. Oh and I love the friends Buffy has in this story and having a cousin so she won't be alone after all. Can't wait for Draco to show up.

So please continue.
Comments from author:
Alright, first, Snape and Louise had a relationship, she became pregnant and then lost the baby. Snape then had his brother help Louise, at her request, 'die' and move to the states. Snape then owed his brother a favor. The brother, at some point in time requested help from Giles which meant he owed Giles a favor. Hank and Joyce Summers were always Hank and Joyce and were the parents of Buffy. After Buffy was revived, and still had her slayerness, for want of a better word, the council then went to Hank for the purpose of buying Buffy. That last day, when he went to pick up Buffy, he was going to serve custody papers to Joyce. For what ever reason, the council changed their minds and decide to eliminate both parents, keep the money, and just take Buffy. Someone called Giles and warned him. He then call in the favor that Snape's brother owed him.
Unfortunately, Giles died in car crash while transporting the Buffy decoy. Since the brother was only suppose to care for Buffy until Giles made it to England, plans were changed and the brother called in the favor that Snape owed for helping Louise.
With Louise having had died eight months before, they decided to claim that she and the baby survived and that baby was Buffy.
In no way, shape or form are Buffy and Snape blood related.

Second, Snape is saying former is because he knows that Dumbledore is a manipulator and decide that some truth for hiding the big thing, Buffy still being a slayer. If Dumbledore knew this, then he would want to use her, and though Snape at this point doesn't love her (yet), he is still her guardian and takes that seriously. So no on wanting Dumbledore to know.

Third, I love this story also but am at stand still on how this story should go. I know how I want it to end but do not know how to get their. I will continue it, someday.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Eureka
Review:
So any chance of you coming back to this story?
Comments from author:
Someday, but I have tried for over a year to make myself write this and nothing feels right so I decided to just put it on hold for now. Maybe after I get my mind off of it I will finally be able to continue.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Current Donor)thetwitmachine
Review:
great and interesting sounding story. well written, engaging dialog. Please keep writing it!
Review By [(Current Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from twlight
Review:
This is a wonderful story despite the many many spelling errors in it. I love that Buffy is making friends with Nevil the poor guy needs more friends. Foolish Willow getting over eager to do something when it could easily cause problems. I have to say that I love Doyle's vision it was rather cool. I am looking forward to the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [26 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
wow this is awesome. what a twist. It makes sense that that would be something that would cause him a moment of true happiness. Poor Buffy once again being alive has caused someone she loves to basically die. only this time he has changed to the stuff of nightmares.

I am a little confused though, is Buffy Snape's daughter or is she really his niece?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from kegan
Review:
I'm so happy you updated, it's been a while, lol. Anyway this still looks really interesting and I can't wait for more! I've always been a sucker for Buffy/Draco romance!
Review By [kegan] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from shi
Review:
All have have to say is more please. I love it.
Review By [shi] • Date [20 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from (Recent Donor)jackie
Review:
I love this story and hope you'll update soon, I can't wait for more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)jackie] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
I love this story so much and that was a great twist the cousin being there. I am glad that it appears Buffy will have somebody from her family being with her...helping her. I hope you update soon. Great story!!! Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Good update! I can't wait to see who this mysterious person is that Buffy knows. Don't make us wait too long :)
Comments from author:
I am gladded that you enjoyed it! I am half way through writing the next chapter so hopefully it will not be long.
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [29 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from purrfus
Review:
Continues to be an interesting mix.

Your note indicated you aren't working with a Beta. You might want to try reading the chapters out loud. Some of the words are what they need to be be.

For example - when the boys are peeking into the library - in the story they are pecking.

Good Luck
Comments from author:
Thank you for that suggestion. It is something that I will impliment from now on.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from sugarslave
Review:
I love the story so far. It's really interesting. And I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

P.S. And if you are looking for a beta, I'm offering my services.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time for a reveiw!
Review By [sugarslave] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from JeanClaudeslover
Review:
I like this... but I'm kind of confused so I hope you continue... I guess that was Harry who walked into the library cause i don't see the twins talking to Draco
Comments from author:
You are right, it is not Draco, it is not Harry either. I have only seen this person used in one other story.
Review By [JeanClaudeslover] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from macalaarmstrong
Review:
Wow!!! That was a great story so far, but I can't figure out for the life of me who the boy is...I guess I will have to wait to find out. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I am glad that you are enjoying it so far. I thank everyone will be surprised when the boy id. is reveled.
Review By [macalaarmstrong] • Date [28 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great start to a story! I do have a question, is Snape Buffy's real biological father or is he just saying he is her father now since her parents are dead? I'm not sure I understood all that. Anyhow, I can't wait to read more :)
Comments from author:
What happen and how Buffy came to this point will be explained in the chapter after the next!
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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