alright let me get this straight. Hank is Buffy's real dad and Snape's brother. Snape and Buffy's mum had a child who died. Hank sold his own daughter to the Council and Snape act's like Buffy's father as a debt he repays his brother for hiding Buffy's mum. Or Louise/Joyce remarried to Hank who isn't Snape's brother and know nothing about the wizard world, The wizard who helped Buffy and Gilse is Snape's brother. Which one is the right version because I think I misunderstand some thing.

Oh how come Snape is saying former Slayer, she still is the Slayer. So former doesn't make sense and the Council wants to use Buffy to make more Slayers. Her wand and actions already showed that she is still a Slayer. Didn't he wanted Dumbledore to know that Buffy is still the Slayer.

I wish you would continue this story because I would like to read more. I also love to see Snape loosen up with Buffy around. Will Angelus be re souled before he finds Buffy and will The PTB help the one who will preform the curse. Will the Council be taken care of by the PTB or show how to take down the Council. The PTB is already protecting Buffy one way or another. How did Snape react after the more detailed story Buffy revealed.

I really wish you would continue. Oh and I love the friends Buffy has in this story and having a cousin so she won't be alone after all. Can't wait for Draco to show up.

So please continue.

So any chance of you coming back to this story?

Someday, but I have tried for over a year to make myself write this and nothing feels right so I decided to just put it on hold for now. Maybe after I get my mind off of it I will finally be able to continue.

great and interesting sounding story. well written, engaging dialog. Please keep writing it!

This is a wonderful story despite the many many spelling errors in it. I love that Buffy is making friends with Nevil the poor guy needs more friends. Foolish Willow getting over eager to do something when it could easily cause problems. I have to say that I love Doyle's vision it was rather cool. I am looking forward to the next installment to this wonderful story.

wow this is awesome. what a twist. It makes sense that that would be something that would cause him a moment of true happiness. Poor Buffy once again being alive has caused someone she loves to basically die. only this time he has changed to the stuff of nightmares.

I am a little confused though, is Buffy Snape's daughter or is she really his niece?

I'm so happy you updated, it's been a while, lol. Anyway this still looks really interesting and I can't wait for more! I've always been a sucker for Buffy/Draco romance!

All have have to say is more please. I love it.

I love this story and hope you'll update soon, I can't wait for more!

I love this story so much and that was a great twist the cousin being there. I am glad that it appears Buffy will have somebody from her family being with her...helping her. I hope you update soon. Great story!!! Keep up the great work and update soon. Have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

Good update! I can't wait to see who this mysterious person is that Buffy knows. Don't make us wait too long :)

I am gladded that you enjoyed it! I am half way through writing the next chapter so hopefully it will not be long.

Continues to be an interesting mix.

Your note indicated you aren't working with a Beta. You might want to try reading the chapters out loud. Some of the words are what they need to be be.

For example - when the boys are peeking into the library - in the story they are pecking.

Good Luck

Thank you for that suggestion. It is something that I will impliment from now on.

I love the story so far. It's really interesting. And I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

P.S. And if you are looking for a beta, I'm offering my services.

Thank you for taking the time for a reveiw!

I like this... but I'm kind of confused so I hope you continue... I guess that was Harry who walked into the library cause i don't see the twins talking to Draco

You are right, it is not Draco, it is not Harry either. I have only seen this person used in one other story.

Wow!!! That was a great story so far, but I can't figure out for the life of me who the boy is...I guess I will have to wait to find out. Keep up the great work and have a lovely day.

Smile,
Macala A.

Thank you, I am glad that you are enjoying it so far. I thank everyone will be surprised when the boy id. is reveled.

Great start to a story! I do have a question, is Snape Buffy's real biological father or is he just saying he is her father now since her parents are dead? I'm not sure I understood all that. Anyhow, I can't wait to read more :)

What happen and how Buffy came to this point will be explained in the chapter after the next!