Just read again. Good story. More coming hopefully? Please?

Oh poor Buffy and Xander

I find it oh so unfortunate that the author has not been able to continue to write for this poignant story!!! It's my hope that the author will be able to resume writing!

is there going to be more of this? because i would love to see where you go with the calliegh/ hank connection and i love the buffy xander interactions being real friends not just people who speak because of a common goal.. .. anyway.. love the story so far and hope to see more of it

Please update.

Awesome story so far, I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani

Hank sucks amd Joyce is ticking me off.

Some of the characters are a little OOC but I don't think they're too bad. And its your story, you can make the characters be whoever you want or need them to be. I am enjoying the story and depite the fact that it has not been updated in a long time I will still hold out hope for an update sometime soon.

I love this wonderful fic so far. I really hope that in the next chapter Buffy gets herself emancipated. Speaking of said chapter, is your muse going to let you be inspired to update this wonderfully excellent fic again soon? Again I love this.

Good story so far, however I need to correct something:

you wrote: "I have no idea who Faith’s first Watcher was so he’s totally made up"

Faith's first watcher was a FEMALE... And it's established in that first episode where she appears... These are easy facts to get right. Great writers get these things right or correct them if they make a mistake... It's fine to go of the reservation if you're making up characters that don't exist, but if you're trying for continuity, you HAVE to get it right.

here's the dialog I found on the web:

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+Buffy: He killed her, didn't he?

+Faith: (angrily) They don't have a word for what he did to her.
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Still like your story, however.

I love this story so far. I can't wait for the next update to see what happens next. Update soon please :)

Great update. I'm sorry, but what exactly was Hank expecting. He's pretty much ignored his daughter since the move to Sunnydale. He should be glad that she didn't resort to violence. Nicely done, RM.

a great part, really looking forward to seeing whats happing with xan.

Arrggh! I've discovered that I don't mind reading angsty stuff if I start reading *after* it's been mostly resolved in the story. If I have to *wait* for it to be resolved, not so much. ;-)

Nice update, but I'm a little confused on Xander's dream. I assume you meant it to be that way for a while, no?

Of course =) but think hard.. maybe it's outfigurable (it's a word in my dictionary so it's a word I'm allowed to use) It won't be too long though =)

As Fyrloche said Faith first watcher is a woman, lot of fanfiction call her Linda but I've searched for the canon name and it is Diana Dormer.