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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Wow. A large mix of both good and bad effects.

Nice view of the world :)
Comments from author:
Thanks! I didn't (and don't) view the Cordyverse as the bleak place that some seem to; I'm aiming for the usual Joss mix--but without selling the Fang Gang short.

shybob
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin
Review:
that was spectacular. Especially the last paragraph. And the last sentence. All around, a wonderful beginning to a sadder reality.
Comments from author:
This is one of the few stories I have that benefited from quality feedback. It was a little frustrating to address all the critics, but the final story is much better for their input. Thanks, AFW!
Review By [(Past Donor)halfbloodpuffskin] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
Review:
An idea I have never seen before, good for you! Nicely done, it flows well from the show and builds upon it in a logical and interesting way. An AU rife with possibilities such that I wouldn't mind seeing you pick it up at odd moments just to see what happens.

Thanks so much for sharing this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. I'm working on expanding the 'verse...I thought it was one of the neatest ideas on AtS that got dropped before its time.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [27 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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