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Review of chapter "The One and Only Chapter" from PenelopePendragon
you know i can't read this story without my head starting to itch. its funny....good going twinkie
Review By [PenelopePendragon] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The One and Only Chapter" from (Moderator)Ava
Hmmm...I'm confused as to what's on Dean's head because if it's head lice then they are far too small for Dawn to see across a room and if Buffy attempted to kill it by tossing it to the ground and stepping on it she merely helped to infect the rest of her house and should really whip out the vacuum.

As for the character interaction: Dawn and Xander were having a sweet moment of togetherness and Faith's mannerisms and speech were nicely in character. Buffy's reaction to the louse seemed a little off but I suppose it wouldn't be fun to find little bugs crawling around in your boy friend's head.
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Yeah, in my head Dawn wasn't too far across the room but she did have her distance. hehe i would do the same. but actually lice need blood to survive. the second they are seperated from it they die. people change sheets and all that stuff because it makes them feel better but it doesnt actually do anything. and i THINK the same goes for eggs but im not 100% sure.

but thanks for the comment :)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The One and Only Chapter" from heathenseyes
Twisty. I like it. Funny as hell.

Review By [heathenseyes] • Date [29 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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