Review of chapter "A Time To Celebrate" from Chosenfire
How did I miss THIS?
I love this, in the purely Sam/Dawn fan kind of way and Dawn going dark was a great touch, very enjoyable to read and thank you for letting me know about it. The imagery was great adn Willow's confusion was heartwrenching because this was her sweet little Dawnie.
EvilSam made me tingle, you write him so very masterfully and great way in answering the prompt. I only have one little nag and that Dawn becoming evil is a little sudden, I read the first story and its all from Sam's POV, it would be great if you included a Dawn centered insight, her reasoning and what she went through to reach that point.
It would be great for explanation and because I'll get a new fic out of you anyway I can. Great job and I hope you write more to this because Dawn being evil just has so manu interesting possibilities.
Review By [Chosenfire
] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Time To Celebrate" from MrGordo
Ok This fic was very well written. But very hard for me to read. I LOVE dark fic don't misunderstand me. As a darkfic this was great.
But there was something I can't put my finger on that gave me an uncomfortable chill.
Dawnie going dark of her own free will just...brrr
Buffy yes, She has a deep well of darkness far under the surface. Plus the Slayer is demonic in nature. if pushed beyond her mental and emotional limit I can see HER snapping. And even then, Like veiny Willow. Turning on her family would only happen if they got in her way. She'd kill them yes. But she wouldn't ENJOY it.
But Darth Dawn? She took pleasure in killing a member of her surrogate family. That was VERY unsetteling. Unless there's an uber spell in the mix
Review By [MrGordo
] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Time To Celebrate" from Melli
I loved this one, too!
Again, very interesting. It doesn't hurt that Willow is actually my least favorite BtVS character, so I wasn't exactly mourning her loss. ;) You wrote that whole scene incredibly well, with Willow's relief fading and turning to fear when she realized what trouble she was in. I am very curious about where Sam is going with this, and what his over-all plan is, and how Dawn ties into it. Are you going to continue this series? Please keep up the great work, I sincerely hope you write more of this!
Review By [Melli
] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Time To Celebrate" from Saturn
What!?!? There are no reviews on this one? That's a crime. I like it very much. Well written as usual and with an idea that I haven't seen before. I love new ideas. Keep your brain in top working order so you can keep turning out fics for my amusement. :)
EDIT: Oh wait...I realized this just got posted. lol. I thought it had been posted for a while and was trying to figure out how I missed it.
Review By [Saturn
] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated