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Vassago Review:
Short. Very, very short. It's good, and I would love to see more of it, but it's short. That's probably me just being used to 5,000~ word chapters from other sites though.
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Vassago ] • Date [9 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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MrPowell Review:
Plan on continuing?
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MrPowell ] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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Schiavona Review:
This is a very interesting start to this story, I hope you continue it soon.
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Schiavona ] • Date [2 Jan 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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Bill Review:
Great start!
Review By [
Bill ] • Date [21 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Present" from
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nice start so far, hope to read some more of it soon
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LFW Review:
Interesting idea and good work on Dawn and Faith
Comments from author:
Glad you're finding it interesting, it's been rattling around for a while, and I never did like the way that Faith was treated in canon, so I'm changing things a bit.
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LFW ] • Date [3 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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Infinix Review:
Not sure where you plan on taking this beyond Xander gets the memories from a spartan but I have faith that it will be interesting.
Comments from author:
Well, I gotta finish the graphic novel first before I finish the next chapter, (its half written,) so we'll see where it goes.
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Infinix ] • Date [1 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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Bluesnowman Review:
Great start.
Review By [
Bluesnowman ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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CPTSkip Review:
Very cool start. I hope you update quickly as your story has so much potential I'd like to see where you take Xander and us.
Comments from author:
Need to finish the graphic novel first, then I'll finish off the next chapter.
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CPTSkip ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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IAMZIPPY Review:
cant wait for more
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IAMZIPPY ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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Bobboky Review:
nice
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Bobboky ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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wolfshell Review:
Interesting. I'm guessing this is a cross with 300 the Movie and not the real event. As such, I hope to see more.
Comments from author:
It's the movie, the one from the Frank Miller graphic novel, (uber violent?)
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wolfshell ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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Dogfire Review:
Loved it cant wait for more.
Review By [
Dogfire ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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MrPowell Review:
Great start... Looking forward to more.
Review By [
MrPowell ] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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