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Review of chapter "Chapter 9: Return of the Jedi" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done a great job with this story.

::Start reading the next story in the series::

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The only questions that really matter
are the ones you ask yourself.
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9: Return of the Jedi" from MarcusSLazarus
Review:
Hoo boy...

Talk about dark; you definitely maintained your usual standards for this story, didn’t you?

Joyce continues to be a rather interesting character as the storyline progresses- still not certain about her presence, but it allowed for an interesting insight into Boba Fett’s mentality if nothing else-, her willingness to accept Jedi training contrasting in a very interesting manner with her Mandalorian desire for revenge against Darth Traya and Boba Fett (To say nothing of her marriage to Wedge; wouldn’t have minded seeing a bit more of how that developed from their first meeting to this point, but it being an ‘open secret’ was kind of interesting as well).

Dawn’s trials also managed to be interesting reading, on that topic- particularly the manner in which she stood up to C’Boath; DEFINITE elements of Caleb in there, when I look back-, but it’s the new take on Luke’s training that I really admired; now only does he now have greater insight into the Jedi thanks to his time with Anakin, Qui-Gon and Buffy, but he also has a greater idea of what the role means and how to properly open himself up to prepare for his role as the central example of the new ‘wave’ of Jedi…

Plus, of course, I liked the use of Angel and his group in this story; it might not have been a MAJOR role in the story- they only REALLY appeared in a couple of chapters, but at least they got a chance to help out in the “Star Wars” reality for the first time since the series began.

In general, my only real PROBLEM with this story is the sudden, out-of-the-blue decision to take Jabba out NOW that came up in the last chapter; if they were rescuing Han it would at least make sense, but with an Emperor to kill- even if they’re not planning to topple the Empire completely- it’s like they’ve decided to settle a ‘personal grudge’ against a giant slug that they could probably kill just as easily in the chaos after the Emperor’s dead.

Still, that issue aside, things are looking interesting so far; keep up the good work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [24 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9: Return of the Jedi" from grd
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Just reread this story and it was perfect. Loved so many parts from Dark Lord of the Scotch comments to Furby to the epic battle on Cloud City. Thank you.
Review By [grd] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Great Expectations" from SwimmieTeam
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PLEASE update i love this series
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [18 Apr 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Great Expectations" from mithrilandtj
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I love this series!!!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 2: Flight from Hoth" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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tx for this new chapter as a pre-xmas gift;) so i wish you and your family a nice xmas and hope t see more of this awesome story soon.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ch 2: Flight from Hoth" from (Current Donor)Tempi
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Nice story so far. I enjoyed your other stories and will be eagerly awaiting new chapters. Merry Christmas.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [22 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Ghosts of the Past" from Dragonelf
Review:
It is a great series you have written so far and I am looking forward to read any new chapters and/or stories you might get inspired to write and post here.

:: Feeds the plot bunny ::
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [11 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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