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Review of chapter "1. Marv's first love" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
I am a little confused as to what gender Marv is, read through your story again and see what I mean.

Otherwise very nice first fic.
Comments from author:
I know what you mean in some sentences I put Marv as a she. But Marv if you have read the comics and seen the movie its a man.

Thanks for the comment because now I'm going to change it
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [1 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "1. Marv's first love" from (Recent Donor)kaela
I left this pairing and am very pleased with how you treated it. The POV is very Marv. The only thing is your A/N that says that Marv is not Robin's father is not necessary because it would actually be neater if he was. Anyways good job.
Comments from author:
I know but it just that for what I've read of Nikki Wood I've always have had the idea that the father of Robin is Nikki's watcher for some things said and also it seems really weird Marv being the father
Review By [(Recent Donor)kaela] • Date [1 Dec 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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