Very nicely done, though i doubt willow owuld have waited so long to use magic (she didn't hesitate in s7 to use a "this is not your droid" thing, and it could have worked with lamb there at the beginning).
Comments from author:
LOL, yeah, she could have done something like that, but this was so much more fun :-)
Nicely done! The plot was well-executed and the various mistaken-for-Trina incidents worked well, particularly the one with Logan. The interrupted phone call with Wallace was great, too. Since you asked for feedback, I'll add that the one thing that did feel missing was any thoughts by Willow about actually having murdered someone. While she seemed to work through that pretty well by the end of S7, I'd imagine that being arrested for some other murder would bring some of the Warren issues back up for her.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments, and you brought up a really good point about Willow's past. For some reason I never even thought about her killing Warren, but you're right, it could have been brought up in this story and fit right in. Thanks!
Review By [firefly] • Date [26 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Argh. i can't believe i forgot to review this the first time i read it, This piece is quite good, and i hope you write more.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It's a bit of a departure from what I usually write, but I enjoyed doing it. I've written a fair amount of Buffy fic, and some stuff in other fandoms, but crossovers are tough for me, for some reason. I'll try to write more, but no promises.
Review By [Satori] • Date [2 Apr 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]