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Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting twist ending that doesn't really seem to be an ending.
Comments from author:
Thank you?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lost and Found" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Ooops on my review part - Denver Colorado -- more city like big on cross country transients, including that of the supernatural type when you're in a world that has them. Also an interesting world where the Star Gate exists as does at least some of the DC characters from Gotham City... and the Council of Watchers.
Comments from author:
That was actually laziness on my part. I didn't want to have to show too much of the new slayer, so I just found an active girl in another fandom. Also, that may have been about the time I watched one of the new Batman movies...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cruciamentum" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I thought you did a good job of establishing that all of the children were into physical training so working a little harder could pay off for Buffy. I'd still like to read an extended version of this chapter or some earlier adventures fighting evil in Colorado Springs.
Comments from author:
Once I get all of the establishing stories taken care of, I do plan on doing a collection of one-shots in this series. Various battles could be included as different chapters if I get a detailed-enough request that it's not just 'Buffy see demon. Puns and quips abound. Dawn/Xander/Saied/Giles/etc in danger. Buffy slay demon.'

Thanks for the reviews!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Chosen One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I know you have already finished this but I don't remember how it works out with the stargate characters or much beyond this. This version of Colorado Springs is not a hellmouth, I imagine? just more deamons to come in because of Buffy being the slayer and living there?
Comments from author:
Not a hellmouth; just slightly greater-than-normal demonic activity due to having a Slayer, a powerful witch, and the Key living there. There will be little Stargate interaction in this story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heart Stopping Fun" from shadowflame
Review:
Could you add a oneshot of George's reaction to Buffy being the Slayer? You go from them talking about telling him, to him knowing and patroling.
Comments from author:
If I ever get back into this series, I will include that as a side chapter. Thanks for the idea, and for the review!
Review By [shadowflame] • Date [8 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from mountainelements
Review:
I like how the characters work together, but I think that you need to develop the story a bit more. Dawn is in college, but what are the rest of the group doing? Jobs? Relationships? With a bit of expansion, this would be a really good story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. My original plan was to delve deeper into the other characters in the sequel(s). Thanks again!
Review By [mountainelements] • Date [7 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from apollo
Review:
I hope you continue this series at some point. I really liked it, and I would love to see it continue through the founding of the SGC and their adventures through the Stargate!
Review By [apollo] • Date [3 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
That was really nice.. I especially enjoyed the one of story with Giles and Hammond. I would love to see a future story (set in present times) where SG-1 and the Scoobies interact. Since this is an alternative time line, I assume there won't be an initiative or any real angst between the scoobies and the military and there's a really good rationale for everyone to meet socially. Since Hammond is aware of the scooby reality, maybe he might hire some of them... Anyway, I would love to see more of this fun universe you've created.

Blue
Comments from author:
Hey, I promise that I will write more as soon as I can convince my brain to get back into this story/fandom. I'm trying, but the inspiration is currently lacking. Stay tuned, it'll happen eventually.

BTW, thanks so much for the review!
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from arkeus
Review:
heh, nice :-)

still a very quick rhythm, but nice.
Review By [arkeus] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Love the thought of Lindsey getting a shot at being raised in a secure, loving environment this time around, but I can't quite picture him as a BLOND, even as a two-year-old (since his hair as an adult was a fairly dark shade of brown).
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading! Yeah, I wanted to include Lindsey, and thought that having him be Xander's son would be perfect. As for the blond/brown thing, in some pictures I've seen of Christian Kane his hair looks more blond-ish, and I know from experience that pale blondes can grow up to become dark brunettes. Besides, I think he'd be adorable as a little blondie! ^_^ Not light blond, of course, but a darker shade. Okay, now that I've probably annoyed and bored you, I'll wrap this up. Thanks again for the review. I hope you've enjoyed it!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [19 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from anautumnyarn
Review:
There is a St. Giles street in Oxford - I was there this past term and had quite a giggle every time I walked down it.

Positively lovely story and I am glad they finally all found eachother.
Review By [anautumnyarn] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from samtwentyfive
Review:
Cool Dawn found Andrew..although you do have to wonder if a Big Bad Bat is gonna show up in Denver, just because you know he is not gonna let things go after the Watcher's Council shows up and he gets the back story for Batgirl.
Comments from author:
Interesting idea... I may just have to put that in my one-shots fic... Thanks!
Review By [samtwentyfive] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from Miranda
Review:
ohh, I hope you continue this and jump into the future when stargate happens and lindsey is grown up :)
Comments from author:
I plan to... eventually... But first I have more back story to attend to!
Review By [Miranda] • Date [17 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Secrets and Surprises" from (Past Donor)LiastraLee
Review:
Yay for Andrew and Dawn! And Xander getting to change Lindsey's life is so cool. Must have more. I want to see what happens to them next.
Review By [(Past Donor)LiastraLee] • Date [17 May 08] • Not Rated
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