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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Christy
Review:
Wow now THIS is a way to do a supernatural crossover...very inspiring
Review By [Christy] • Date [3 May 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very well done. thank you for the fine read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [2 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Kirallie
Review:
So Dean and Sam are twins and part demon? Buffy verse demon or SPN verse?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [30 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from feekh
Review:
Oh wow, this is just... so much more than I expected. Lovely and so sad.
Beautiful.
Review By [feekh] • Date [6 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from peachy
Review:
This is a really cool idea. Nice job.
Review By [peachy] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from btvsfrk
Review:
This is awesome!!! Do I sense a Buffy/John pairing!!! This is so cool!! Hope there's more! :) :)
Review By [btvsfrk] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
This is not at all what I expected. Very interesting beginning--if Willow took them back in time, how far did she take them? Are they going to reconnect with the Sunnydale people, or is the story about him raising them?
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
I understand completely it is John thinking that not you, but that's why I was puzzled becuase with his army experience and everything I would have thought he would have run into a lot of different people.
Comments from author:
Some people do, some don't. Since it's never been stated clearly one way or the other, I took a little license.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Moderator)Kiwikatipo
Review:
A very well written story but I am puzzled as to why you had the conception of Buffy's twins take place in such overly horrible way. Rape is bad enough without throwing in the incest component.

either traumatic event is enough to have Buffy not want or be able to look after the twins why have both?

And why didn't Willow look like a Rosenberg? Jewish or German people (Rosenberg is clearly either a Jewish or German name to the first time hearer) come in all shapes and sizes.
Comments from author:
Answering the last first, it's John's POV, not mine, and going on thirty years ago.

The rest is explored in the second story, which I am working on getting posted on this site.
Review By [(Moderator)Kiwikatipo] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Chosenfire
Review:
OH FREAKING WOW!!!

This is amazing, I didn't expect anything like this and while you are dealing with a touchy subject you are doing it well and making everything blend together so damn well. I love that Missouri suggested keeping the boys isolated and the way the memories are screwing with everyone is perfect.

Buffy is going to be pissed at what Willow pulled but it makes sense that she needs to heal, because uffy would devote herself to her sons and forget about herself. Also, I love that Buffy is the boys mom, brilliant idea.

You are doing a great job and I can't wait to read more.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
Very interesting!
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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